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Feb 26, 2012 16:32

Title: Rivers and Roads
Fandom: Once Upon a Time
Pairings/Characters: Emma Swan/Regina Mills, Henry Mills, Mary Margaret Blanchard, David Nolan
Rating: PG-13ish
Word Count: 6500
Summary: One night turns into two, and two into five, and a week later, Regina is still staying at Emma's. They haven't talked about it-not even Henry has dared to upset ( Read more... )

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wickedbrdway February 26 2012, 21:56:39 UTC

Ahh! I was waiting for this update and it was soo good!

adventurepants February 27 2012, 04:20:33 UTC

Thank you!

damelola February 26 2012, 22:25:58 UTC

Yes! Yes! Yes!

I love it so much. Emma and David bonding, MM being offended at Snow White being a wuss. Regina changing without changing and even when she makes the Big Scary Gesture, you can still feel her sighing and rolling her eyes about it.

Looooooooove. I will probably say even more things soon <3

adventurepants February 27 2012, 04:23:14 UTC

I AM PSYCHED ABOUT YOUR POSITIVE REACTION TO MY STORY, FRIEND. <333

And man, I am so into David the awkwardly supportive Dad, I want it to be a thing in reals so I can stop being mad at him.

mayireadtoday February 26 2012, 22:35:19 UTC

Awesome: “See?” she says, between straddling Emma on the bed and deftly unhooking her bra. “Much better than talking.”

Wonderful.

korenap February 26 2012, 23:26:20 UTC

Really nice. Everything in this story seems to flow effortlessly. All the characters work and the reveals very natural.

adventurepants February 27 2012, 04:26:16 UTC

Thank you! Sometimes I worry I get too into finishing something to let it flow naturally, so this is nice to hear.

harper_m February 27 2012, 01:47:58 UTC

This story continues to be excellent. Your Regina is perfect - I'd have hated for her to lose her bite. Of course, I am interested in seeing what her heart brings with it because it should be highly entertaining, and I'll be looking forward to (presuming it's coming) how you're going to handle that. I'm also enjoying the way that you've shown how Emma now means quite a bit to Regina and how Regina's 'just for Henry' cover story is as vehement, if less defensible, as ever.

adventurepants February 27 2012, 04:40:20 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I didn't want Regina to go too soft too fast, because I think she's too set in her ways. I think now she's going to have a hell of a time dealing with her full-on, un-filtered emotions, and that would probably be fun to tackle if I decided to write more.