ZOMG! early update!

[adriatic_air]

Anyone know the pain of a perfectionist author? Let me tell ya, churning out content is a freaking PIECE OF CAKE. It’s the bloody editing that goes on for DAYS. I am finally satisfied with this part of my fic, and I hope you guys like it. Because if not, I will wilt and expire. In fact, *thinks about it*, *is quite dead now*.

Ian: Kiba's here again

Comments

hitplayer:D

[anonymous]

HELLO nothing like reading a nice fic when i'm dead beat. good rhythm with the story, i think the pace is rather comfortable.

hmmm, more ash-building here! i like the way you portray her, in-depth and it is real too. it is kinda multi-faceted, i like hahaha :D despite being angsty she still tries to keep her cool with her parents and not spark any outright disagreement.

she gets back in her own way though? coming out of the closet? kil? omg jingbaojingbao :DD

BUT omg how come i get this feeling kiba doesnt feel the best-friend way towards ash?! and i think right, your portrayal/sneakpeek of kil kinds of give off this feeling of "Ash's sexual escape". somehow, somehow. tell me it isnt so! pure relationship eh?

but on the whole nice job, ash is pretty much a character who is easy to relate to(:

Re: hitplayer:D

[adriatic_air]

HELLO nothing like a nice comment to keep me writing.

i am SO glad you like this. because i died editing it. ash isn't really planning to come out of the closet with her parents yet, though. it was just a random stray evil thought. LOL.

and no. like i described in the fic, ash and kiba's relationship is PURELY PLATONIC. not even the kindd of friends with benefits. because kiba would die a horrible death by Kil's hand if he tried anything with Ash.

i'm braining storming for plot idees now! so the next one might not be so soon!

[anonymous]

kiba and ash have a relationship I could only dream of. Anyway, you really go crap over sasuke's glare, don't you? I see bits of you and sasuke in ash. The whole attitute. Somehow, you made a very complicated ash, yet ya, she's easy to relate to. I think its because people are all really very complicated things. You get it down really well. =D

I like ash a lot, but I like kiba better. And you should be very happy hearing this.

Rereading this again when im not hell tired..ya..its definitely markedly better than the last.

Are you going to write again tonight?

[adriatic_air]

you hit the nail on the head as always, but only because you know me best. Ash has a good attitude going, but in many ways she was the younger version of me. you may be able to see it here. when i used to think the world was a whole load of crap.

anyway, i see you fall into the IAN category where guys with all the charm are the order of the day.

and dont worry, though i get disheartened with your frank, shitty comments, after awhile i sometimes realize you're right. so i have learned to store away your comments to improve myself, though i might not like them at the time.

hmm. a hard question. my sasunaru fic is calling out to me. so is this, so we'll see.

i'm late ):

[anonymous]

hello!
i think ash is sick? she's thinking dirty even in the shower! (ha.haha.)
can't believe i waited until now before reading this, sorry!
can you give kiba a really cool bike soon? one that he keeps in the arcade carpark or something. or near his principal's backyard! what if he meets somebody on the bus? no, he is to stay single as LONG as possible. reiteration, as LONG as possible.
i have so many things to say!
her mum is a nutcase, she should wear a pacifier to control her saliva issue.
her dad is useless. i bet he was reading the aunt agony section for some um, guy's problem. (he was reading sth yeah)
i still love kiba. "“You say something, princess?” he sounded so cute! <3
maybe i'd better shut up soon.
one last thing, i forgot what i wanted to say. man.

till the next kiba, yum! <3 yum yum.
IAN, still. :D
bye!

big kiba, small kiba.

[anonymous]

hello, i know what i want to say now. (:
the way you make kiba out to be, he isn't exactly the manliest guy ever!
what i mean is, he's like way too scared of ASH, and, yeah.
so maybe he should start asserting himself or something. be more manly? (i totally respect ash's attitude. but a guy's still a guy, right?)
otherwise it's not as much fun!
it'll be BIG ASH and tiny kiba. (i understand too, it's a platonic thing. i really do. *crosses fingers*)
just really wouldn't be quite so much <3s!

whatever it is, i've already decided to stick by kiba, BIG or small, so. (:(:(:
i'm having fun with the caps, man.

bye! :D
IAN.

stuff

[anonymous]

i realised everything i said was kiba-related.
just to show that IAN,i'd like to comment on good spelling! grammar! apt vocab! (it rhymes!) and COOL one liners!
"YOU MUST THINK I’M BLOODY STUPID TO BELIEVE THAT!" hahahahah. laughedmao (:

bye,
guess who!