Resurrection, part V

[adrenalineshots]

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René struggled to keep his eyes open. He suspected that the other man had asked for that particular ointment on purpose, knowing how hard it would be to fight the pull of sleep with its soothing smell in the air. However, the paste would indeed ease Porthos' pain, and René could not truly fault the man for his scheming.

It felt strange to have

Comments

[fredbassett]

Fabulous story! It paints a beautifully believable picture of how the three of them came to be so close. And I loved Treville in this, too!

[adrenalineshots]

Thnak you so much! I ended up enjoying writing Treville more than I had thought possible :))))

This was just as enjoyable the second time I read it...

[laurie_bug]

And now, to paraphrase Oliver Twist:

Please, may we have another?

SOON!!!

LB

RE: This was just as enjoyable the second time I read it...

[adrenalineshots]

Lol! Careful what you ask for ;)

Sequel is, in fact, well on its way, but its still far from finished, so it might still be awhile...

You know, if this story was in anyway enjoyable to read, everyone has you to thank for it? Reading a story filled with bad spelling and grammar mistakes can be quite boring...

Re: This was just as enjoyable the second time I read it...

[laurie_bug]

well, I just did a little clean-up and polishing work...the gem was already there. That's all due to your skills and imagination!

Yay to the promise of a sequel....can't wait to see what you have in store......

[szarabasjka]

I'm sorry, it took me this much to comment, I just couldn't handle Treville memories without crying.
finally read it and let me tell you it was So good!!
there's something in the rhythm of how you write, how you balance pain and feelings with wit and fun, and make the entire thing sway in the head of the reader. I really like your writing.
So... now I'm off to read the next story.

[adrenalineshots]

:((( I'm so sorry about that...

Glad you decided to come back and read it, but I would have totally understand if you gave this a wide berth... sorry for the zero warnings :(

And thank you so much! If the rhythm is there, its not on purpose, I assure you *g* just a happy coincidence... or maybe the fact that I can't keep serious for too long ;)

[szarabasjka]

OH! c'mon! you have no reason to add tags to your story, you're not responsible of others' past.
I might have to explain thou, the reason why this hurt me is because PTSD is like that, one moment you're okay and the next, you're there, smell of ozone and oil and sweat, the sound of the engine and the shots and blood, it was like you knew exactly what to trigger off. is not easy, you're awesome.

I guess, as I'm sure someone wiser than me said; Talent can't be taught.