Tiny story II

[adrenalineshots]

Written for the SPN Writter's Lounge Wednesday drabble. Mary's thoughts through her life. Spoilers for 4.03.

She became an orphan, but she couldn’t leave her hunter ways behind; she had her normal life, but it was all an illusion, a trick of light and mirrors; she kept her past from John and doomed John’s future to become her past.

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[xwacky]

she kept her past from John and doomed John’s future to become her past.
::shiver:: I love this like burn!

[adrenalineshots]

Is loving something like burn a good thing? *g*
Thank you!

[germanjj]

that's so sad and so beautiful!

[adrenalineshots]

Thank you :D

[savingfaith333]

This was lovely. I especially liked these lines:

He gave her a choice too. A warning to be heeded ten years in to the future, a choice that sounded so silly and pointless when it left his lips that it too would’ve been forgotten if it weren’t for the tears in his eyes.

Dean crying... *sigh*... gets me every time. Great job!

[adrenalineshots]

Thank you! Figured that if anything would cause an impact in young!Mary it would be the sight of that gorgeous man all sniffling and weepy.

[jackfan2]

Wow.. just.. wow..

*wipes at tears* Stop doing that to me! You hear me? STOPPIT! *waves flappy hands* Just .. I hafta hug you now. Mary's heartbreak is so palpable.

*sighs* I am both sad and happy. How is that even possible you could do that?

[adrenalineshots]

There you go... big paper hankie to wipe that nose... all clean?
:D Ok then! Givas a big hug!

Thank you!

[ladylothwen]

Oh, Mary. Oh, Dean. Oh, Winchesters.

It's so sad and heartbreaking that really they were doomed from the start. That Mary's past became her family's future all because of a choice and lack of choices. You captured that beautifully and I will put this in my memories for later reading.

[adrenalineshots]

Thank you! There really is no escaping that sort of Greek-tragedy destiny...