Oh wow, it's been a while since I've seen a story from you...and this was definitely worth the wait! The excuciating pain of the lumbar puncture made me writhe, and then the anxiety of what getting Dean out, the scary symptoms at Bobby's--you really had me going, only to do a 180 with Dean's improvised explanation--followed by another reversal where you really hit hard about Dean's after-effects from Hell.
Oooh - looks great! I made PDF, RTF, and MOBI files so that I could read it on my Kindle. Feel free to share them if you like. They're here. No problem if you'd prefer not to - just thought I'd give you the option.
Very enjoyable story with lots of Hurt/Sick Dean (my favorite kind). I liked that Sam took him to Bobby's and I liked that you didn't pass over Sam's concussion and showed him suffering from the effects of it. As always, Bobby was a safe haven for the boys. Thank goodness he still lives in the fanfiction world since the idiots on the show killed him off! And good job following up with the girl who rescued the boys. Dean ended up "saving" her life also :) Thank You.
Even when he does much other than just be there for the boys, Bobby's presence was always a safe heaven for them. Too bad that ended in the show. Thank you!
I liked how this story came together, how it fit with the themes of late season 6 with the hybrid monster with no name and the mysteriously busy Cas, and how Sam had to come up with a plan to break down out of the hospital, and how it affected the girls who saved them and how Dean had to make sure they were okay. Great story, I really enjoyed reading it!
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Well done, very thrilling and emotional!
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... even if this one felt like forever to be done *g*
Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Thank You.
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