Snow

[adorkablefae]

My creative writing final.  Incorporates Taming The Muse prompt "The Underground" as well as the one my teacher gave me when I told him I was stuck which was "cranberries".  He is slightly odd.  It's a rewrite of a shorter story I did earlier in the term, though I couldn't tell you which I like more.  I'll probably post the original at a later date

Comments

[dedra]

very well done. the foreshadowing was nicely interwoven into the story and the twist at the end was certainly unexpected. you have a great way of telling the story. nice.

[adorkablefae]

Thanks! I'm kind of in love with this story at this point just because I've done so much with it over the past few weeks and I'm glad to see I've accomplished what I wanted. :]