Comments | adoringaudience: Secrets, Part 26&27/46

adoringaudience

Secrets, Part 26&27/46

Mar 24, 2013 09:46

Story type: High school/college/roommates AU
Warning: Angst.
A/N: We’re back in the present again. Sorry if I keep confusing you.

Go >here< to start from the beginning or >here< to re-read the last part.

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Comments 13

bksbracelet March 24 2013, 09:11:46 UTC

Things do get more complicated as you get older for us, but if you are in a weird arse relationship with Brian Kinney it's positively out of the stratosphere

poiuhbvs34567 March 24 2013, 09:29:23 UTC

I hope Ethan won't make damages in their friendship... A woman can hope. I like Brian confronted Justin with his (not so big) lie. Thank you for the chapter.

har2 March 24 2013, 12:23:16 UTC

Wow! The way you described Brian's early morning bedroom visit with Justin and Justin's reaction to his touch was right on the mark. You are doing an outstanding job of slowly having the story unfold, especially their relationship. It is cool to get Justin's take on Brian as he is gradually beginning to realize Brian has more than "friendly" feelings towards him. I am really wanting to know where Brian went during their separation and why he didn't contact Justin. Will we find out soon?

sandraj60 March 24 2013, 14:09:13 UTC

And Brian would never have to know that your motivations were of a different kind.

At least Justin was enterprising, LOL.

And maybe the lesson you are meant to learn is that you can find it with someone else.

It may sound unpopular, but maybe Ethan was just what Justin needed. He still was not asking Brian for what he wanted, but at least he was coming to a realization that he couldn’t go on the way he was.

“I’m asking you, please don’t lie to me.”

This is why I am so addicted to this story. Everything has a precarious balance and that sentence sounds so foreboding. It seems that Brian is really asking about why Justin never showed up, if he can really trust him about what happened in the past, or it could be my lack of sleep.

ARRRGH, ya killin’ me here. I have to find out what’s going to happen next.

Please don’t break Brian’s heart again, Justin!

realbeeotch1 March 24 2013, 17:00:50 UTC

This is very nice, it just I'm not feeling Justin,he way way to hang up on brain, it feel uneven/unhealthy. Where as brain who is young to is living his life good/bad to the fullish. What is brain job? I like Ethan for a start for Justin but he should meet other guys to before he and Brian finally get together for good.