Fiction Dreams, revised and expanded - rough draft

[admiraldav]

First, allow me to thank those who responded to my previous (incomplete) version of this story!  I have implemented their changes -- at least to the best of my knowledge; it is conceivable that I have missed a few spots -- and I have also completed the story.  Of course, I do not mean that I have absolutely finished the story.  I have brought the

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from Amy, Lover of Everyday Mischeif

[anonymous]

Hello David

[slowupheaval]

check your email :)

Many thanks

[admiraldav]

I'll work through the alterations you propose just as soon as I have time. I really do appreciate your thoughtful critique! It means a lot to me, to be sure.

-David