Woah

[adi_san]

Haven't been here since AGES. Indeed, AGES.

Went to post some kind of new fanfiction. I am unable to finish it though. It's all in my dream, yet it just slipped from it somewhere away. I will leave it like that then.

Title: Count to N
Words: 1167
Series: Saiyuki
Rating: PG, I think
Warnings:  medical equipment, math
Characters: Nii/Ukoku, Koumyou

Comments

[blown_wish]

Simply brilliant. Love this idea; and the execution knocked my socks off.

[adi_san]

Thanks. Hoped to make it to the point of "does artificial life has its own feelings and dreams"

I was just asked by my GF to continue it. So... It may be continued.

[blown_wish]

I'll appear milliseconds after posting.

[adi_san]

May happen in the summer, July, when I will have free time. Now I have month of exams.

[pfmoi]

I don't have the proper words to express how poignant this story was. I don't know what "Zero" is, but I felt SO bad for 3, realizing that it was a failed experiment. Then, I kinda felt bad for Nii, with 11 unexpectedly demanding to know it's "real" name.

[adi_san]

"Zero" is mostly a blob of cells, turning in time into a living organism. In other words, something that could be created in woman's womb. It's "person" shows that humans want to become like God.

3 shows the feelings of artificial being in front of its death. That, despite being deaf and mute, he has feelings. Like a lab rat has feelings to.

11 shows the self-awareness of project. It's a question of artificial beings' soul and identity. The question of a clone being a real person.

[randomdiversion]

Ok. I'm creeped out now.

Well done.

[adi_san]

Oh my... I am sorry ^___^;;

I always try to put some kind of meaning behind every story I write. Even crack ones... I just wrote the meaning of this one.

Too much Philip K. Dick for me, I think...

[randomdiversion]

I meant that you were effective in being creepy. Not sure I particularly wanted to be creeped out at the moment but it means that the writing is well crafted. No need to apologize for doing a good job.

[adi_san]

"Effective in being creepy"... Thanks >XD

Still, I didn't want to creep out, but make one stop and think about it.

Still, thanks for reading and sharing yor opinion with me. It's helpful :3

[kirathaune]

Frightening and brilliant. And all this time, Zero has been plugging along.

Thanks for sharing!

[adi_san]

Thank you. I'm glad for it to find readers.
Indeed, Zero is swimming peacefully while it all happens xD

[laurose8]

Such a good job of making all the numbers real, and individual. Congratulations, too, on showing Nii's machine-like quality.

The form of the fic is very graceful, and fits it so well.

[adi_san]

Numbers, indeed. The italics are important as well. It was pain to fit those to fic XD
He is qualified, no lies in it. He has the degree for something after all.
Thank you.