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Fanfic [HP]: Breaking Up The Girl [1/?]

Aug 24, 2007 01:31

Title: Breaking Up The Girl
Category: Harry Potter
Character/Pairings: Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Harry Potter, Oliver Wood
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by J. K. Rowling & Bloomsbury, et al. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2, ( Read more... )

fic: harry potter, fic: all, character: hermione granger, fandom: harry potter, fic: breaking up the girl

Comments 6

ridea September 7 2007, 03:01:04 UTC

I like it. Seriously, I love the idea of it and the fact that regardless of the nicknames, you're writing the characters rather well. I'm curious as to how this is going to turn out. Good luck.

astral_angel September 13 2007, 10:14:07 UTC

XD Thanks!

madderbrad October 20 2007, 09:31:27 UTC

Great writing, with just enough skipping back and forwards to keep me interesting - and worried! - without making things *too* confusing! I'm full of questions though ... about Luna ... and Dumbledore. I was wanting to warn Hermione that he'd pick up on her tension and future memories as soon as he legilimised her, even as she was going over her memory of his being a Legilimens ... has he read her mind already? Even though she 'avoided his twinkling eyes'?

Being a H/Hr man I find things like this:

“But I’m going to be right there with you.”

... particularly pleasing, so I'm going to hope it might end up H/Hr. But even if it doesn't I think Hermione's going to continue to be a good friend to Harry, so that will satisfy me.

More please!! :-)

astral_angel October 20 2007, 11:25:51 UTC

:) Thanks for reviewing! As to your questions, well, they're going to have to wait, I'm afraid. :P Dumbledore's legilimency will come into play soon, though I can tell you that he hasn't read her mind quite yet.

Luna's awesome isn't she?

Not too sure about 'ships at the moment, though I have to say if it does end up with a ship, H/Hr does stand a good chance. We'll see, though. :)

firelights October 28 2007, 01:42:59 UTC

Awesome! I really like this. It reminds me of a story I read on fanfiction.net, by an author called Rorouni Star. You should check it out sometime. Her stories are wonderful. :]

astral_angel January 15 2008, 09:08:47 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, she's pretty good.