#14 Kiss Virgin

Aug 03, 2015 00:05

Title: Kiss Virgin
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 990
Summary: Luhan thinks the reason Jongin never kisses him is because Jongin is a “kiss virgin”
Warning/s: None
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rating: pg-13/pg-15, round: 2 (microfic fest), wc: 500-1k

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kitty_nim August 3 2015, 09:26:59 UTC
sehun you prick
lol
ahh chicken flavoured kiss, what could be better than that for jonginnie? ♡
thank you for writing!

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kitty_nim August 19 2015, 13:59:12 UTC
ahh tysm for the (first!) comment :) i love making sehunnie such a brat, jongin is gonna kill him for that later (but i gave him that chicken flavored kiss to make up for that haha)

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breezeohsummer August 6 2015, 19:12:28 UTC
Sehun lmao
and then the ending, of course Jongin would like that.
Thanks!

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cherrylea_13 August 19 2015, 13:59:55 UTC
haha thank you for reading/commenting!! :)

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ultrabookworm August 7 2015, 20:07:58 UTC
Ahahahaha this was really cute><
thanks for the ficlet^^

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cherrylea_13 August 19 2015, 14:01:22 UTC
ahh i like cute ^^ thanks to you for reading and commenting!

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capricious_moon August 9 2015, 16:05:24 UTC
Xiulay teasing Lu Han about not getting any, even a measly kiss, made me laugh. I really think they would tease him about that IRL LOL. I knew Sehun was up to no good when he described Jongin as a kiss virgin, the sly brat LOL. Who knew Jongin didn't want to kiss him for the most unexpected reason, though? I bet he enjoyed the kiss anyway even if he only mentioned the chicken.

This made me laugh from start to end. Thank you for writing this! ^o^

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cherrylea_13 August 19 2015, 14:04:23 UTC
wahh this comment made me so happy, i loved that you enjoyed all the parts of my drabble (and yeah i imagine xiulay to make fun of luhan like that too LOL) making you laugh was the goal!
really really thanks for reading and commenting!! (also yes, jonginnie definitely enjoyed the kiss bc luhan's an amazing kisser :'D)

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thehuntress_88 October 20 2015, 22:25:07 UTC
That boy is a sex god on the dance floor, the picture of ultimate sinful seduction - lean limbs twisting gracefully across the stage, glistening coppery skin catching the spotlight, smoldering eyes giving dark “come hither” looks, pouty lips curving up into a devilish smirk.

i don't know why but this slayed me bc it's so true and no matter how long you've stayed in the fandom jongin still manages to make you feel things

Catching sight of the waitress approaching with their meal, Luhan snatches a piece of chicken right off the plate and stuffs it in his mouth. Once he’s satisfied that it’s overridden any lingering taste of coffee, he swallows, grabs Jongin by the collar, and crushes his mouth against his.

luhan is the best. that is all.

thank you for writing this, it's such a lovely ficlet ^^

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