in absentia
IN ABSENTIA [I]
→ jonghyun/kibum
+ pg-13 / 5847 words / au!supernatural
&’ slight!taemin/minho, yunho/jaejoong
he keeps seeing stars, aimlessly grabbing at them but his fingers are coming up empty.
( he’ll never admit that kibum was just pretty and he couldn’t help himself. )
→ jonghyun/kibum
+ pg-13 / 5847 words / au!supernatural
&’ slight!taemin/minho, yunho/jaejoong
he keeps seeing stars, aimlessly grabbing at them but his fingers are coming up empty.
( he’ll never admit that kibum was just pretty and he couldn’t help himself. )
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nancy, don't kill me if it's not what you expected.
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haydee
words cannot express how blown away i am YOU'VE ONCE AGAIN LEFT ME JUST SPEECHLESS WITH OUR WRITING UGH I FUCKING LOVE THIS WTF IHU BUT ILU2 APSOIEGJAPIOSDJF /WEEPS ON YOUR SHOULDER/
your dialogues kill me, and to me those are the highlights of this fic tbh. They show the interaction a lot clearer, and your jongkey is perfect ;______________________________;
YOU INCLUDED YUNJAE IN THERE TOO /BLESS YOU HAYDEE/ WEEPS
omfg you have to continue or i'm going to roll off a cliff and it'll be on your conscious SOB JK BUT SRSLY YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THAT
“what the fuck.”
“just stay still.”
“seriously-”
“kibum.”
I AM SO GONE APWGIJPIJGPOISJDF omfg only 8 words BUT IT HAS SO MUCH MEANING BEHIND IT IDEK??!???! APSOIGJDF
I give you my soul ok ♥
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this made me really happy jsyk.
and have i ever told you that your comments are fucking hilarious?! yeah they are! because i spent half my time trying to come up with how to reply to this with laughter and ASDFGHJKL i don't think i can beat this lovable spazzness. you know?
anyways.
/SOBS THANK YOU SO MUCH BB. you never fail to amaze me with your compliments. i'm honestly just thankful for you even bothering to read this. SOOO THANK YOU THANK YOU.
the dialogues were the easiest to write i find. so i'm glad you found it more helpful in understanding the story a little bit. everything else was just a piece of shit that i wanted to step on :)
YUNJAEEE i had to add yunjae. ASDFGHJKL. they just had to be there. i just miss them sfm. /cryingggg ;____ ( ... )
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i really hope that this fic didn't confuse you too much,
and don't worry.. i'm currently working on the next chapter
so stay tuned! thank you again and i'll see you!
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I feel like it might have sad ending though sdf :'c
But I'm reading your older fics and your writing is so sooo beautiful
Your style is so seamless and everything flows so nicely and your stories are really original and they stand out among other fics I have read!
I just read Paper Hearts too and ;a; so saaad, the best fics are always angsty lmfao
But I loved it liek I loved this one!! c:
You're really talented! c:
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thank you so so much. i'm insanely flattered.
(also, i'm terribly sorry for the late response). but seriously.
i-i don't even know what to say.
these amazing compliments will be the death of me, i swear.
readers like you are part of the reason why i write the way i do,
and without troubling thoughts of how and what's ideal for me to write
in both the kpop fandom and in other genres of writing.
again, thank you. though i still think my writing needs improvement -_-
paper hearts is still one of my favourite fics i've written and actually am proud of.
it's hard to explain but most of my stories are really angsty
because i don't want my readers just feeling happy for the characters,
i want them to really feel; every emotion, every hidden meaning,
every sentence, and flow and originality and effort put into them.
so i hope that helps you understand a little bit about my writing.
i won't be giving you much to go on
but i'll let you know that this story will end the way it's supposed to end.
tl;drthank you for reading and ( ... )
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And you're welcome! I understand your point, I just looove happy fluff idek
And your response wasn't late c:
Ugh you're soooo amazing with your stories and the emotions I understand ;a;
And yeah there are always things to improve upon, I wish I wasn't so lazy with drawing like I started this portrait of Bom like a YEAR ago and its still on my artdesk lmfao
And yes you will see me on the next part you have a new fan :D
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incredibly soon (with poems and drabbles and all their glory),
so you could follow me if you'd like.
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haha, thank you. i'm glad you understand my writing
(because let's face it, sometimes i get confused myself).
everything always needs to be improved on,
it's honestly just a matter of commitment and how far
the artist is willing to make their piece something they'll be proud of.
i definitely know what you mean though. i haven't drawn on my sketchbook since... forever.
i'd love to see your portrait once it's done though!
see you then :)
maybe i should start the second part now. fml.
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It's interesting and I hope you're still planning to continue it because I'm excited for it.
I love Kibum and Jonghyun's relationship in this and the way they interact with each other and the dialogue and everything. It's great.
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i love jonghyun's character development in this, especially his friendship-to-something-more with key. my heart broke a little for onew in his part. please to put more onew in the next installments? and also yunho, although at least he ended up happy with jaejoong. i can't help but feel so sorry for jonghyun's father but i'm glad that yunho (and jonghyun?) are happy with what they chose
minho and taemin were perfection and i have many feels for 2min and <3
i get the feeling of fleeting happiness and impending doom with the jongkey. this isn't going to be a perfectly happy ending, is it ;__;
tl;dr i have a lot of feels for this gorgeous fic and i will now go off and read your other fics
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