Truth (Chapter 2)

[addierabudabu]

Title: Truth (AO3)
Pairing: Juntoshi, Yama, Ninoai
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Rating: R-ish (later in the following chapters)
Summary: Ohno Satoshi lived a perfect, happy life. He was raised in a loving family, enrolled to a famous college with his bestfriends, and had a special someone that he'd possibly marry someday. His life was perfectly

Comments

[riidaaisbest]

Hm~ this series is very intriguing. I'm very curious to who exactly Jun thought Satoshi was and from when did he remember this person? I'm guessing either 1) Satoshi was previously kidnapped when he was very small & his memory is suppressed but his family remembers about it or 2) Satoshi's current family kidnapped him from his real family and they're worried that someone will figure it out and they will get in trouble. If #1 is the case, then I totally can see how they're so overprotective - because terrible things happened before. If it's #2 I can understand how much of a fuss they're making and why they reacted so seriously to his joking comment. They're afraid that the secret will be out of the bag & everything will unravel if Satoshi somehow remembers his former life.

XDDD I'm so excited about this! But... my yama heart aches lol. I can see Sho is going to be dumped (even though nothing is really official but still! haha).

Looking forward to reading more soon <333

[jheili]

This is not a boring chapter at all. So much has already happened with just a span of two days. Wasn't expecting their first 'date' to be this fast, but jun's blatant flirting and satoshi responding with obvious interest is exciting to read! I might feel a bit sad for sho... But really, i understand satoshi's feelings in this. Everything has already been handed to him without even batting his eyelashes... Now where's the fun in that? And satoshi's family being so overprotective...? Their reactions? Haha girl, i can so totally relate! It had happened to me a thousand times! I ended up being grounded with no means of communication to any of my friends at all. XD no cellphones, no laptops, no playing! Argh, not the best situation in the world. :p

Anyway, thanks for the update and looking forward for more action in the next chapter !

As always, great job!

[jheili]

PS: i just read the prologue again and.. Jun's "i'm never letting go of you again" feels like a huge giveaway for the plot. Haha. Now i wonder if the aimiya pair is in on the lie too... Hmmnn...

[yuuki_73]

This is looking like The Truman Show!!! Everybody know something that Ohno doesn't! And Jun is the key to the truth...
Too bad you left Arashi. Your JunToshis were really amazing!!!
I even thought about read Hopeless, but, of course, wouldn't be the same...
I will miss your writing!!!