Black Orchid Chapter 1 PG

[addicterated]

Title: Black Orchid Chapter 1
Pairing: Onew/Taemin, Key/Jjong - more pairings in later chapters I think
Length: 3202
Genre: Romance/Angst/Vampire!Jinki
Rating: PG
Summary: Jinki, a Sangre Baxia is at a fetish ball to do a favor for a friend and to look for his fated Mate. Taemin, a human, is there out of curiousity. What happens when Jinki

Comments

[fuckingtaemin]

This is really interesting so far! I can't wait to read more.

[addicterated]

woot, glad you liked it so far, more is coming :D also, good morning bb.

[imvus]

Lord, lord, lord, this is going to be so goooooood. This first part is so.....fjdkfhlash. I love all the details and visuals that you write and add to the story. it just makes it that much better. And the tension is just building.

I am going to have to be very patient to wait for each installment but I can feel it already because I am sitting on the edge of my seat at work, (and probably have a weird look on my face reading this, trying to look up and smile normally and not all crazy, when guest walk by..lol)

Between you and Min7girl posting on a regular basis, I think my summer reading is all set. And then adding all the other great writers on here I know longer need a book club, (plus they would never have SHINee) wouldn't that be great to have a SHINee book club.

*HUGGGSSS* Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!

[addicterated]

thank you so much for reading, and a shinee book club would be so cool sigh.

:)

glad you liked more coming

[mistresalie]

/dead I reaaaally can't wait to see how this series progresses! I find myself absorbed in your writing (like getting sucked into the world you've created with your writing), it's truly...exquisite XD
I love how you characterize them, they seem just like the actual Jinki and Taemin and yet, they are different, and obviously entirely your own characters.
I love Vampire-ish AUs and those D/s kinks, so this is like, one of the most ultimate fics I'm ever going to read. Perhaps Shots would be like the second best? I'm not usually a silent reader nowadays but I find myself embarrassed to comment on smut fics written by such pros ><
Blood Kiss reminds me of manga. haha.
Love it! <3

[addicterated]

Woot woot, thank you for your great comment and please be welcome here and don't be shy, I love comments. Also if you didn't see this, here's a visual post I made for this scene. http://addicterated.livejournal.com/88176.html

[min7girl]

Dongwook was taemin's trainer...hehehe that's fun. It gave me many ideas. :)

As for the rest of this...ooooo. I like it. I want more. Please post it soon. I'm begging!

I like how Jinki is the go to guy among the vamps for that certain kind of release. I also like Jjong as a sub. But I always have. And the crowd watching at the ball and then the reaction they had to each other was so powerful. Sigh. So yeah I want more of this.

[addicterated]

I was trying to think of someone older and so on and he just popped into my had and it's all your fault. Well, we will find out that him being the go to guy for that kind of stuff is part of what makes him kind of an outcast...dun dun dun...More is coming, second chapter already started. :)

thank you *huggles*

[kaybee38]

Oh this is so good. You know I love my AU's. I really like the "forbidden" premise as well. I also love the little subtle hints, like the description of Taemin's outfit, the "exhibition", and Jinki's role in it, even how you mentioned that he sings on the roof sometimes. I want to know more about the Sangre Baxia and the types of vampires they are, and why Jinki is considered different. Can't wait for the next one!

[addicterated]

Lots and lots of stuff is going on in this, and i will try to make it so you don't get too much info dump at once, glad you liked it so far <3

here's link you might want, visual aids again.

http://addicterated.livejournal.com/88176.html