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I Call The Shots - Chapter 3 part 2 NC17

Apr 10, 2011 21:32

Title: I Call The Shots - Chapter 3 part 2
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 6909
Genre: Romance/Fluff/ Master-slave or Dom-sub whichever way you want to look at it
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the collaring which takes place in part 1, Jinki and Taemin explore.
A/N Because I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged ( Read more... )

ontae, dear muses, my fic, oh boys!, otp, jinki, unf, too much cuteness, onew/taemin, splodey brains, haterz to the left, why is fic so complicated, idek, so going to hell, key is fabulous, word count, whining about writing, love love love, look at me being all writerly, my fic: i call the shots, onew, i am good job

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addicterated April 12 2011, 23:48:11 UTC

As always your comments make me feel wonderful and humble me at the same time....thank you very very much :)

wynnetimate April 11 2011, 02:01:45 UTC

Nnnnnnnnng. Allow me to gather my brain off the floor for a sec.

Will give you a long!comment tomorrow, love. Promise. <3

addicterated April 12 2011, 23:48:50 UTC

*meeps you* Still waiting, lol, hope you liked it nevertheless. :)

imvus April 11 2011, 02:35:11 UTC

This is Poetry! Love! Passion! Contentment!

imvus April 11 2011, 02:54:21 UTC

I feel like Taemin right now, unable to coherently stutter out more then one word at a time. Letting this chapter sink in so I can verbalize better what I am trying to say.

addicterated April 12 2011, 23:49:28 UTC

Thank you :) Having my fic called poetry is a lovely compliment, I appreciate it muchly :)

kaybee38 April 11 2011, 02:40:31 UTC

SPOT!!!

addicterated April 12 2011, 23:50:06 UTC

I"m sorry i'm so fail at spotting. <3 glad you claim your own.

min7girl April 11 2011, 02:47:45 UTC

SPOT!!!!

min7girl April 11 2011, 03:32:16 UTC

Devastate me," he whispers, and there's nothing playful about the words. He's serious; his dark eyes full of entreaty. "I need it Jinki, I need to feel I belong to you, deep down inside. Everywhere. Make me beg you, scream for you, call your name over and over again, whatever you want."

This right here is a line i shall dream about forever. Holy mother of... "What is language, what is speech? Taemin almost can't remember." Neither can I! This is amazing! Help me regain my mind. Wow! I love this. I am gonna go re-read it. hehehehehe.

addicterated April 12 2011, 23:50:37 UTC

*huggles* Thank you so much, your comments mean a lot to me and glad you liked it :)