This Shining Moment

Nov 26, 2010 00:50

Title: This Shining Moment
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun
Length: 1705
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Rating: PG13, maybe.
Summary: After their rather spectacular coming together, Heechul sets about protecting Kyuhyun from disturbances.

Heechul opens his eyes and is briefly disoriented )

kyuhyun, my fic, my fic: moments, heekyun, kyuchul, heechul, so going to hell

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hit0rigurashi November 26 2010, 06:53:12 UTC
protective!Heenim?!
definitely something i'm not expecting but it's a welcome change... never saw this coming...
heenim baby-ing Kyuhyun here is definitely a first *as far as i know* and i live it!!!

and kyu's such a baby here...i wonder when his snark is gonna manifest itself...

looking forward to next update! mwah! <3333

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addicterated November 26 2010, 06:57:57 UTC
Yeah I know it's unexpected but I think Heenim shows a great deal of perception and understanding. Kyu is feeling extremely vulnerable right now. I mean for all he knows, Heechul was gonna be like, "bwahahha, I had my fun now get out", cause we know Heechul can be like that at times...right?

He'll start recovering in the shower I expect. :D :D:D

thanks for reading and hope you liked it despite the somewhat ...different attitudes. My feeling is, they can't be snarky all the time, especially with someone they love, y/y?

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addicterated November 27 2010, 00:14:26 UTC

hit0rigurashi November 26 2010, 06:57:21 UTC
by the way... when you said in your previous post that you're gonna put up the next chapter (this one) tonight... i was thinking, it should not rain so there won't be any problem with my internet connection tonight hahaha!!!

after a few blinks, i saw this chap's already up! yey!
i guess it's nighttime in your place... *early afternoon here*

ok... i'm being a stalker already, being the 1st to post in your 2 consecutive entries... kekeke

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addicterated November 26 2010, 06:59:28 UTC
psh, I don't mind this kind of stalking. This is a new fandom for me and so, having people to talk to and read my fic makes me happy and feel like I'm making friends. Yeah to me it's...almost 2 am. It's Friday now, early Friday morning. And I'm so happy that you're like..ooh, when is she updating. I'm really trying and wanting to keep up with a daily update :D

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catherine_leite November 26 2010, 06:59:19 UTC
/Dies of fluffiness...
*contented sigh* they are soooo in love...
*sigh* (^U^)

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addicterated November 26 2010, 07:00:57 UTC
*hurries to resuscitate you* Yes, they are...extremely. :D This is seriously my SuJu OTP. I'll read other stuff and may even eventually write other stuff but this pairing is just...it for me. So, it's gonna be all love love love, mostly, LOL. Though I think they will fight too. Heechul especially strikes me as the jealous type, you know?

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catherine_leite November 26 2010, 10:22:01 UTC
/eventually wakes up... lol.
jealous!heenim.... wonder how it'd be like... although i think he's a bit... possessive.so well,he can definitely be jealous in some way.
my imagination has already been like this; hee gets jealous over him,and hot sex afterwards... lol!!! *perverted me!sorry,can't help it*

*nosebleed.dies again*

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addicterated November 26 2010, 13:57:32 UTC
oH yes, he's extremely possessive I think and since they can't be right geographically together all the time, I can easily imagine Heechul having a jealous fit and this arousing Kyu's temper and so on and so forth

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cablackwood November 26 2010, 07:00:32 UTC
Awwwwww! Heechuls so sweet! x)
and he is the ONLY person I could think of that could pull off wearing an "outrageous silk kimono" and sunglasses and it look wearable xD

ninja sungmin XD
no matter what, I always find sungmin being a ninja hilarious

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addicterated November 26 2010, 07:02:51 UTC
It so worked in my head. I even visualized the kimono, it's like red with big gold and pink flowers on it *giggles* and the sunglasses....soooo Heechul. And yeah, he *can* be super duper sweet.

And yeah ninja!Sungmin is hilarious with his sweet face but I saw part of a video when he was twirling this big staff thing around and I mean *whipping* that thing around. I would conk myself on the head with it but he looked pretty lethal.

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cablackwood November 26 2010, 07:07:57 UTC
I've seen a few vids of sungmin whipping that staff around (looks mighty hot ^_^), and every one I see, I'm always waiting for him to accidently let go and it go flying, hitting someone over the head xD

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addicterated November 26 2010, 07:10:00 UTC
yeah it does look hot. Seeing that is the only reason I can ever buy him being like a security guard and stuff like that in fics. And yup, it's kinda scary watching him do that and he's sooo good at it. It's like..wha? This is pink bunny boy? bzuh?

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amorei23 November 26 2010, 07:16:05 UTC
owwww...i'm sensing hardships coming from Kyu's side...hmmmm

yes..you should let this go on and on...ahaha, i cant wait for the next part...

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addicterated November 26 2010, 07:18:54 UTC
hardships? not sure what you mean but i'm going to keep writing :)

glad you like it, yay!

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amorei23 November 26 2010, 16:14:44 UTC
oh...if you're not gonna make it angsty again then I'd be very happy, Kyuchul fluffiness and smut would be very much welcome...the pairing is starting to grow on me, or rather if it's with Kyu I dont really have a problem...

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addicterated November 26 2010, 19:17:10 UTC
oh there will be some angsty, but also lots of lovie too. :D I can't handle too much angst, not for these guys :D

and yay for growing on you :)

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