I Call The Shots - As Close to pwp as i get

[addicterated]

Title: I Call The Shots
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 4215
Genre: Romantic Smut/M/s
Rating: NC17
Summary:  Taemin is angry but really he's horny/ Jinki has a sudden fit of DominatingKinkiJinki (Established Couple)
A/N Because  I didn't want to sound like an even bigger pervette than I actually am, I have aged Taemin up in this fic so that he's a

Comments

Been lurking forever

[min7girl]

Had to get an account and log in just to tell you how much liked this! Your posts keep that fangirl in my very happy!

Re: Been lurking forever

[addicterated]

Hey thank you, i'm glad you're enjoying :)

[sakiikumi]

I'm really speachless. This is smut but it's beautiful. It's filled with emotion and it's so real it's almost unbelievable. I'm really impressed. This is one of the best Fics- no stories- ive ever read. You are so good! :)
I'll be reading more of your stuff!!!! Love <3

[addicterated]

thank you thank you. I hope you find other stuff you like. I'm pretty much exclusively On/Tae for SHINee and Kyu/Chul for SJ>

[lullabyrui]

*wipes blood from nose*

I'm pretty sure I died.
*sighs* I needed a moment.
This was so good.

I mean I love me a caring and sweet Jinki, but when hot sexy Jinki comes out I can't help but sersiouly drool.

I can't even.....I don't even....I love you! Lol
Under all the hot awesomeness their was still their love for each other. I just loved it so much.

Favorite parts? Pretty much everything!
I swear this was so well written that I could actually hear Jinki's voice when he spoke all low and soft. *dies*

I just wanna steal you and make you my pesonal Ontae writer forever. Haha.
Your writting makes me remember why Ontae is my favorite pairing. AHH!

SO wonderful <3

[addicterated]

Thank you, your comment was so sweet :) I'm glad you liked it :)

[stjoan4eva]

SPOT <33333333

[addicterated]

*Dances around your spot*

[stjoan4eva]

You're a scary bitch, you know that?

Hold up, before you take offense to that, let me explain.

I need a shot of vodka for this, hold up.

Ok. You have a line: Taemin decides in that instant that Jinki knows his most secret fantasies without even trying.

That is what you did with this fic. And the other OnTae as well, but with this one, good lord...

First of all, stop apologizing for the "romance" in your PWP. It is amazing, it is what every PWP writer should strive for, and don't you EVER feel bad about it.

I'm supposed to be working on Camden Road right now and I just want to stop completely, delete the file and just post a link to this instead, I am DEAD serious. Because the level of your craft, the chemistry and subtext and sexiness and emotional heights that you wrote here? I can't even touch that shit, and I really just want to be like "fuck this noise GO READ THIS BITCH RIGHT HERE, I AM THE BURGER JOINT TO HER FANCY STEAKHOUSE. YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT."

"You have no idea what the sight and sound of you begging me does to

[addicterated]

*Takes you by the hand and sits you down and hugs the stuffin's out of you

[jinkibumiminho]

What to say...this is beautiful, and hot, and kinky, and wonderful. I think this is the best "smut" I've ever read, but it's so much more than smut.

My OnTae are still in the cuddling stage...well, Tae is cuddling...Jinki's on adorably clueless receiving end.

We only have six and a half months until baby is legal (though that still makes me a pedo).

I think I'll go..."take a shower" now. Sweet Shisus' shibrows.

[addicterated]

I'm so glad you liked it :)