Height and Breadth - Moments Chapter 13

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Title: Height and Breadth - Moments Chapter 13
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun,
Length: 2137
Genre: Angst/Drama/Romance
Rating: R for language mainly
Summary:  HeeChul and KyuHyun begin to deal with the aftermath of their rift
A/N I know this update is kinda short but that's how I roll sometimes. I hope you like it anyway. Chapter Title is referencing a

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woot, hope you like :D

hrm, should i be spotting people? i am fail at this i guess.

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silly bb, you can spot any time you want. I just don't know the rules of etiquette here. LOL, you are welcome to poke around my journal and whatnot too :D

I love his spazzing. Oh did you hear my Heenim died his hair back to that black and about that style. I am so happy he got rid of that blonde shit

No, not really. I can't really imagine them being in love and not completely being wrapped in it, call me crazy but I feel these are people who FEEL deeply about things. So I"m glad you like it instead of giving me wtf looks lol.

And I'm an emotional person, I'm also one of those people who spend a lot of time observing others etc...so I think/hope I portray emotions in a realistic way.

I felt that the emotions were so intense in this chapter that i (and the reader) needed a rest before the sexing LOL.

[cablackwood]

I likes ^_^

I think the twitter refrences as hilarious! xDD

"I know my screen name is HeeDictator and all but I'm not that bossy."
pfft! Yeah RIGHT! xD

"Oh of course, because I was going to rush right out and tweet about you being so clingy and girlish?"
On any other day, I wouldn't doubt it

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I loved those touches, my favorite parts are usually the ones that just sort of...spring up and those ones did, among some others.

We all know HeeChul is the boss, lol.

I love their sarcasm with each other, it's so them.

[cablackwood]

I think the sarcastic banter that gets thrown between the two are just sweet, Kyute, and adorable! xD

I think little touches like that make the fic more enjoyable ^_^

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*smiles and huggles* I'm so glad I have people who get my writing. I've written stuff in other fandoms in the past where I felt like...nobody got it.

[sumomo_yuki]

Guhuuuuhhhhh the ebille cliffieeeeee T_T but Guh love the update. Interesting speech made by Kyu and of course Heenim
Can never look horrendous!!! Lol

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sorry bb...the cliffie had to be done. Sexy soon :D

Glad you loved it, yeah Kyu <3 and of course Heenim is magic *nods nods*

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updated - http://addicterated.livejournal.com/36758.html

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I sound weird I know when I say it takes longer but it really does LOL

i'm glad you're still liking and following and that you can read it over again :)

Thanks *hugs*

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updated - http://addicterated.livejournal.com/36758.html

[kyttenfae]

Ok I honestly teared up and needed kleenex during this. The desperation Kyu felt from Heenim's pain being mingled with his was just *flail!sniffle!flail!* making! They are both such passionate, 100% or nothing people that it makes such perfect sense that they'd throw absolutely everything into each other. Um. No pun intended there. *shifty eyes*

And the humor was hysterical, especially the twitter bits. *totally does not stalk Heenim or anything*

[addicterated]

Awww *gives you more tissues*

Yes, that's it exactly. To me these are people who are tough on the outside cause they are quite sensitive inside, sarcasm and snark are their defenses. So once they love they love 110 percent as fara s i'm concerned.

And um..yeah I"m ignoring that pun right ther e:P

I am so proud of my twitter bits *preens* and I do! I am so glad he dyed hsi hair back to black i could cry..

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updated - http://addicterated.livejournal.com/36758.html