Green Eyed Moment

[addicterated]

Title: Green Eyed Moment
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun
Length: 1334
Genre: Angst/Drama/Romance
Rating: R for language mainly
Summary:  Kyuhyun has to leave for a KRY performance, Heechul's behavior sparks a quarrel.
A/N This directly follows after the previous chapter, as most of them do

Comments

[sumomo_yuki]

ahhh the idiocy that is love T_T poor Kyu.. and Heenim... sigh Hopefully they'd settle it >

[addicterated]

i'm pretty sure they will, but perhaps not right away :/ And yes, it made me sad to write it but i just kinda...had to.

[sumomo_yuki]

Love and life isn't always up and happy, it can be down and sad -shrugs- Time will test relationship and it's only eventual that they will settle what they need to settle between the both of them.

[addicterated]

Yeah exactly and that's why i wanted to show them having a real issue that made sense.

[catherine_leite]

Ah.their first fight... well,we can't always hope they would always be fine,can we?
i just think that this is because heenim's afraid to have broken heart again... hope they make it up...
sad chapter.though still like it

[addicterated]

It is sad, I had a hard time actually keeping them on track to fight and not make up too quick lol. And yes, I think that's exactly it but at the same time, Kyuhyun doesn't want to be basically dealing with that third party in their relationship either. So they both have issues, arrgh. Made me sad to write it, *sigh*

[catherine_leite]

*hugs* don't get sad too long bb... i'm afraid that you’ll ended up making them fight longer if you're sad... XDD

[addicterated]

Awww, well, I'm having some depression issues but that's just cause I'm sick irl (caught a cold) and I hate winter and being cold, but that will pass. And they needed to have this out between them in any case. Hopefully I'll have the next part tomorrow on this.

[addicterated]

I second that, they better make up or else omg!

And thanks, getting ready to take a drive but I'll be on later and hopefully writing.

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updated - http://addicterated.livejournal.com/25351.html

[cablackwood]

T_T

Hangeng always becomes the issuse.
I like how you put the "he didn't just leave Heechul, he left them too" in there. Cause most of my friends that are into suju are hard core Hanchul fans and every time we talk about Hangeng, they make it seem like he just left and abandoned Heechul and not the others.
I like that you said that. Shows that they were affected as well

I like Super Junior's new catch phrase *teeheehee*
made me laugh xDDDDD

[addicterated]

*smiles* this was hard to write but i think it's a bonafide issue of concern, considering how Heechul is. I hated writing it, i'd be happy to write fluffy smut, but i think it would get boring and i dunno it needed to be written. I dunno, im weird. I hope you liked it anyway

[cablackwood]

Yeah, well if they don't have an argument about something, then its not very realistic. And I believe you said that you like writting stuff that could be believable as real
........did that make scense? lol

I haven't read the message that Kyuhyun wrote about Hangeng, but I know somewhat what it said, and I'm just like T_T
Heechul wasn't the only one that felt betrayed by him

Ha! I didn't want to say anything lol TOO SHORT! xDDDD
alot shorter than the others. But a part 2 makes up for it :)

[addicterated]

I think it was just so hard for me to write that I needed to split it up. I know, short response. And yeah you're also right, I try to write something believable, if at all possible. Though I like fantasy too. :D

[italina_bella]

awwww... poor kyuchul. But i completely understand and agree with Kyu. It would have been better for heechul to get over hangeng if possible before going out with Kyu :(

[addicterated]

I'm not so sure it's Hangeng Heechul needs to get over so much as the being left and the fear of losing Kyu also. We shall discover in the next part. :)

[addicterated]

updated - http://addicterated.livejournal.com/25351.html