Loving Moments

Nov 29, 2010 01:12

Well, this was intended to be smutty but it's really mostly fluffy. I guess the muses were feeling fluffy, I dunno. Hope you like it anyway.

Title: Loving Moments
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun
Length: 1991
Genre: Romance/Fluff/Sexiness
Rating: Hard R
Summary: After their shower, Heechul and Kyuhyun return to their room to find that their bandmates ( Read more... )

kyuhyun, my fic, my fic: moments, heekyun, kyuchul, heechul

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cablackwood November 29 2010, 06:54:08 UTC
Haha! The made up room was nice. They really want them to be happy :)

This calls for my 'ITS SO FLUFFY' icon xD

Heechul is pretty right on the nose about himself, but so is Kyu.
All this love and fluffy-ness, its so strong, you know both of them are going to hurt when they have their first fight

Yes it ended fluffy )like it started) but it also ended with a hint of sexiness ;)

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addicterated November 29 2010, 06:57:44 UTC
Hee, yeah the made up room popped into my head about the time I was writing Ryeowook banging on the door in the shower chapter. I was like, I bet he's doing that cause ...*giggle*

Oh yes, you just know the fluffy and sexy cannot continue. And really if there wasn't some fighting it would just be saccharine and boring, at least that's my story and I'm sticking to it, but i'll hate it none the less.

The sex is coming, I swear, they just sort of...went fluffy on me..*giggle*

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cablackwood November 29 2010, 07:06:28 UTC
Yeah, if its all fluff, rainbows, and little pink hearts floating above their heads it can/does get boring and honestly a little nausiating

*waits for the sex* xDDDDD

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addicterated November 29 2010, 07:10:35 UTC
Yeah, I mean I know it's fiction and such but I like to try to keep some basis in reality and no couple, however loving, NEVER fights. If that's the case then someone's repressing and I just can't see either one of these two repressing for long. I feel like both of them have a temper.

LOL. Well no more writing til tomorrow, I wrote, about 5k words today not counting commenting etc.

Blech and tomorrow I have to clean house and be a responsible person lol.

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catherine_leite November 29 2010, 06:59:26 UTC
Okay,first thing first, what's aegi?really have no idea... *ah...i'm such a fail*
they have a very very considerate and helpful family,don't they? lol...
fluffy chapters are always loved!!! more please...

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addicterated November 29 2010, 07:02:21 UTC
I have a post up asking about Korean endearments and somebody answered and said couples use aegi which is a sort of slang for aegiya which is like baby.

Oh yes, very helpful. Hee, I think they are so cute.

Glad you liked it :)

more is coming, as usual.

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addicterated December 1 2010, 05:30:52 UTC

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addicterated November 29 2010, 16:04:41 UTC
Hee, glad you liked it :) more to come as usual

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addicterated December 1 2010, 05:31:06 UTC

italina_bella November 29 2010, 16:01:24 UTC
awwwww they are sooo adorable!!!!

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addicterated November 29 2010, 16:04:16 UTC
:D :D :D thanks

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addicterated December 1 2010, 05:31:19 UTC

usachick43 November 29 2010, 17:20:40 UTC
gahh, they are SO CUTE! i loved all the fluffiness, it was precious :)

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addicterated November 29 2010, 22:49:47 UTC
They are they are :)

glad you liked it :)

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addicterated December 1 2010, 05:31:30 UTC

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