Onew Ache

[addicterated]

Title: Onew Ache
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Length: 1267
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Rating: PG13
Summary: Taemin suddenly understands the meaning of Onew Ache
Warnings:  none really, a little swearing, excessive cuteness, boys in boxer shorts
Note: prompted by this pic and this one of Jinki flashing his tummeh
Disclaimer: See my Disclaimer of Doom if you wish

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Comments

[min7girl]

"You try too hard to seem like this mild, dorky, clumsy guy when really you're like James Bond, sexy and smart and charming and can get anybody you want."

Could not have said this better! So very true! Totally agree with Taemin. Onew is super sexy good gravy hotness on should be illegal legs!

[undeniablysarah]

Pretty much the perfect comment

Taemin (aka you) got it spot on with this comment about jinki. I think the characterization is spot on here. You know I love how u write these two.

Overall I'm very happy you continue this :)

[addicterated]

I really feel like that is the essential truth of Lee Jinki. He's very private? some might say secretive, and I think he cloaks himself in this persona to hide himself from fans and people who are not closest to him, but there's a whole other guy beyond that.

For example, i was watching this "supposedly" dorky dance he was doing after they won on one of the music shows. And it was dorky. But what I couldn't help noticing because I notice everything Jinki related, was how perfectly well balanced and graceful said dorky dance really was. I thought to myself... "aha, Lee Jinki, clumsy my ass - clumsy when you want to be only..."

[peacensafety]

Aw! This is so sweet!

[addicterated]

Thank you! I have to prove sometimes I don't write porn all the time *g* :)

[imvus]

I love mushy time, it's as good as smut time...lol

But for real, I enjoy stories like this because its sweet and the conversations are something that feel real. It just brings their relationships to a different level. It makes you want to just enjoy them.

And I had never heard of Onew Ache....now I know what to call it...lol but then I have it double because I have Taemin ache too!...so it's double impact...lol

[addicterated]

Oh yeah, the two of them are trying to put us in the hospital with all these Aches. :) I think it is important as fan girls to appreciate them not just as sexually frustrating boys *g* but also as people. I really imagine conversations like this in my head for them, that they talk this way - naturally and in a relaxed manner. I like to think they do anyway. :)

[taemint]

This is a perfect ending to an exhausting day. I love how you write them, always. They're so precious and real it's like a peek into their real lives.

"Getting to see you natural and sexy when you're not trying to be anything but yourself." Is the line that just killed me because he's the best when he's not trying to be.

Onew Ache, and Taemin Ache and between the two of them I'm gone.

[addicterated]

Aww, sorry to hear you had a tough day. Glad you could enjoy this to relax. :) I imagine conversations like this for them in my head... I like to think of them as happy like this. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) And yeah I think so too, I really think Jinki is naturally sexy and masculine and stuff and it kind of makes me laugh when I think he tries to cover up a lot of who he is with this sangtae whatever image and people fall for it, lol.

[acornmama]

Perfection...

[addicterated]

thank you :)