Um... Fic Fragment

[addicterated]

Not sure really what this is, just... had the thought refuse to stay away and so i sat down to write it and this is what came out. I apologize that its a fragment but hopefully someone will enjoy it anyway.

Onew crosses one ankle over the other, toying with the large silver magnifying that was left lying on the desk at his elbow. His attention,

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[fuckingtaemin]

Taemin is a pretty bitch /nods. I like the ideas that Jinki has for him.

[addicterated]

He has more! I have decided half my problem is i just like writing kinky porn and I should not sweat it so much. Anyway, more coming, and thank you!

[jinkibumiminho]

You haven't lost your touch!
I'm glad I'm familiar with your particular spin on OnTae, the games they play, because that let me know what sort of relationship I was looking at.
This was evocative and yummy and just a touch scary, 'cause we know what's next on the menu, more or less!

[addicterated]

You never know totally what's on the menu *g* I have some more of this coming, I hope. <3 Thanks for your comment, I so appreciate it :)

[imvus]

spot, will read in the morning! So glad to see you writing. Missed you dearly!

[imvus]

uhmmm, WOW! If I wasn't sitting I would have had to for this. I love the intensity you write between these two. Their desire for each other is so intense but controlled. I admire Onew's control, heck I admire Taemin's, because I don't know how he does it.

Their relationship is so different and their is so much trust... it's amazing.

[addicterated]

I love writing them this way, it's like it's my default way of seeing OnTae. :D Glad you enjoyed it:)

[min7girl]

"He knows that he has almost cried for it, sobbed for every little flex and push and tiny tiny fraction of a stroke until his body disappeared, until he was nothing but the need to come and a hole for Onew to use as he saw fit."

Damn it woman!!! I missed you!!

[addicterated]

I kinda missed me too. Missed you too. *hugs* I think I needed the break though, thanks so much!

[acornmama]

I am not sure if Wow covers all that I want to say here. Sometimes you take me very much by surprise. I think I expected a teasing fragment of something that wasn't a complete thought... and in your head that was probably what happened.
But for me this was lovely and... wow and... whoa and.. sigh and... yessssss. If any of that made sense. :)

Nice to see you writing again.

[addicterated]

I've written more of this, it's evolving or something I dunno but as I said to dallas above, I think my thing is I need to not worry quite so much about story and plot and just frickin' write the porn already lol <3

Thanks so much!