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Title: Black Orchid Chapter 5
Pairing: Onew/Taemin, Key/Jjong (no Key/Jjong this chap)
Length: 3996
Genre: Romance/Angst/Vampire!Jinki/Drama/Smut
Rating: R
Summary: Taemin is having sexy dreams of Jinki and finally requests that they meet.
Warnings:  Sexiness, Swearing, BDSM implications

Note: The end is a bit of a cliffy, please forgive me.
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Comments

[min7girl]

Sweet Mother of .. There you are!!!! SPOT!!!

[min7girl]

Honestly I think this is your hottest Jinki, and You know I like Taemin to have some sass so he's perfect in this too! Please give me more!!! I'll bake you cookies!!!!

[addicterated]

I'm happy you like it bb :)

[min7girl]

'like' is soo not the word to describe my feelings here.

[anapp]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh spot

[addicterated]

hope you like it!

[anapp]

you have no idea how much i have missed this storyyyy but i understand that this is a particular part of the story that must not be easy to write because you have to deal with taemin's lack of belief in jinki's words. i noticed the little changes on the parts you showed me before, and i like how taemin acts like a normal person would (even if im rooting for them to be together asap lmao)

i agree with min7girl, this is by far your hottest jinki. fucking defiance JESUS

WHY DO YOU TEASE US SO, THIS CLIFFHANGER!111111111111111

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Seriously I started to just put the next part in there but I thought it would be too long and I figured I'd just make the next chapter the sex chapter. I'm so happy you liked it... and yes I wanted Taemin to not be so...unf about Jinki that he wasn't a bit freaked out by everything. Soooo happy you liked it, seriuosly.

[undeniablysarah]

LOVE THIS SPOT

[undeniablysarah]

You twat blocked me!

OMFG
now im just in needed and just gah fucking hell.

This Jinki is the best jinki I have read in a long as time. I am going to go back and read this from the begining to fill the void.

oh god. i want a man like this.

-dead- dead- dead-

I am dead

Thank you for giving this reality aspects by having taemin not be so convinced easily, thank god he is no bella swan (dumb bitch)

Gosh I want more of this!

"Tell me...you feel half as desperate for me as I do for you."

YES! TIMES 100000

[addicterated]

LOL.. This comment is a gold star <3 I'm so happy you enjoyed it and I *did* warn for cock blocking, loool. I couldn't help it, it was already 4k words, PLUS i really needed to post it because I've been so ...working on it whenever writer's block would let me so it was like...zomg, I hope this doesn't suck. :)

[imvus]

spot!

[imvus]

I think I was holding my breath through this whole story...talk about sexual tension....shisssh...I think the intensity in this chapter had my heart pounding.

This was so perfect, the build up to something so amazingly "ugggghhh" (because I have no english word that can describe it but a long drawn out f-word)

Extremely sensual (but you are the queen of sensual so that should have not been a surprise) but it does still surprise me anyway..lol... the way you can describe a room, the mood, the food, the emotions, the physical tremors...just everything is so richly sensual.

I mean the whole feeding Taemin and licking the fingers...uggghhhh! The self-freaking control these two have is out of this world.

And I loved the line about the elevator spitting Taemin out..(don't ask...it's the little things like that that jump out at me)

As always just f-ing amazing!!!!

[addicterated]

*pounce huggle* I'm so happy you liked it. I keep saying it but it's just so true. I truly agonized and sweated over this chapter, it had to be just...right or else it was a big ole fail. So I'm really happy. Thank you so much!

[jinkibangs]

Spot ;A; been waiting for this forever

[jinkibangs]

Holy cockblocking Batman why :(((((((

I'm usually not so good with leaving substantial comments, but I feel like there's something that needs to be said about the very last scene. Just because there's something about it that's so sensual and yet intimate on a level that has absolutely nothing to do with sensuality. It's a really great mix, characteristic of, well, what I think are people destined for each other, and you did a really great job with that ^^

Totally worth the wait \o/

[addicterated]

So happy you liked it :) I really want them to have an intimacy that is more than sensuality or sexuality. Tbh, my idea of what mated vampires are like sort of turns on that. I'm so happy you liked it!