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addicterated

Black Orchid Chapter 4 PG13

Sep 03, 2011 03:54

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ontae, my fic, jonghyun, my otp is the bestest, jinki, key, onew/taemin, my fic: black orchid, taemin

Comments 19

wynnetimate September 3 2011, 16:17:59 UTC

The pacing of this story is to-die-for. I am absolutely aching for them to get together, but it's such a pleasant, slow-burning ache.

The world you're building up around them is so dark and subtle. I have to commend you on that; you've made a very palpable history for the Sangre Baxia and the little details that you show throughout make it very rich and fleshed-out. I'm genuinely curious to see where the plot takes you.

<3 Thanks for the update, bb.

addicterated September 4 2011, 00:11:47 UTC

Well it's like a song sort of, it has a couple of plateaus but also keeps rising towards the final climax. *g*

Thank you so much and I'm so glad you're enjoying..

kaybee38 September 3 2011, 20:19:19 UTC

Awww. I knew Taemin would come around. That bite must have left some residual effects of pheremones or something. Yaaay! Another great chapter!

addicterated September 4 2011, 00:10:51 UTC

I am afraid to even go into trying to figure out the chemistry but SB do have glands that humans don't and when they choose, their saliva has some interesting affects on humans...*wiggles brows* they really can't resist each other like usual with me lol. Thank you for reading and so glad you liked :)

kinkibum September 3 2011, 23:04:49 UTC

I wanted Taemin to just be okay with everything and continue to throw himself at Jinki... but I knew it wouldn't be that easy.
Amber, pregnant, with a baby girl!! That is adorable. I'm curious to know exactly what Siwon is doing that would affect mothers.
dkfjsdfkj this is so exciting!! Great chapter~

addicterated September 4 2011, 00:09:31 UTC

it's more what he's not doing, or not allowing SB to do that's the problem. SB are not human and that goes deeper than the fact they have fangs and a higher metabolism/body temperature and somewhat saliva with interesting properties lol... the part about telling amber to punch things to get her glands working properly, that's actually a hint. :)

Glad you're reading and enjoying :)

5_dorra September 4 2011, 18:13:13 UTC

finally got round to reading this !
jinki breaks my heart 3: i can see why taemin freaked out i guess..but..pushes them back together 3:

kpopstolemysoul September 10 2011, 18:25:19 UTC

I just wanted you to know that I read it and loved it and that this note is very, very late. <3