Road Trip - Chapter Twenty Six

Dec 29, 2009 21:41

Title: Roadtrip
Author: addicted-mb
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairings: Emily Prentiss/Jennifer Jareau
Ratings: M
Disclaimers: Criminal Minds is not owned by me.

What's the story about: Emily gets injured on their last case and JJ decided to organise a girl's road trip home with her...what will happen?

Authors Note:
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ttandme69 December 29 2009, 13:22:43 UTC
OMG...this chapter lived up to my expectations and more! You surprised me w/Amb P's reaction to E...the choke scene w/the tea was priceless... Nice to see that Amb P loves Emily and is willing to go to bat for her daughter!

I cannot wait to see how this ends...has it reached the BAU yet??? What will Garcia say? Thanks for posting and sharing, Lisa

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addicted_mb December 29 2009, 20:18:32 UTC
I'm glad it did. I know the Ambassador is made out as a bitch but I do think deep down that she is a mother in their somewhere and she would have to have Emily's best interests at heart. Well I'd like to think so, I like happy endings too much! :D

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authorw December 29 2009, 14:51:56 UTC
This was funny!
Poor Emily gettig so embarrassed in the meeting with her mother.
I wonder how JJ is going to react?

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addicted_mb December 29 2009, 20:21:21 UTC
Had to get some humour in there...this story is
a light one! :).

I somehow think JJ will be ok with it. :) she seems
the more open one about their relationship on this story. Although in the real
show, I wonder who really would be? :)

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systym_d_rail December 29 2009, 16:54:36 UTC
Lol, this was great! Loved the meeting with her mother!

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addicted_mb December 29 2009, 20:22:44 UTC
Glad it lived up to expectations. This chapter seemed to flow when I was writing it and I was enjoying where it was going. :)

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malexfaith December 29 2009, 19:25:23 UTC
You definitely dont disappoint. Ever. And thank god for the lack of one of your famous cliffhangers. I more then enjoyed it, but its still going to be sad to see it end. Im not sure whether I want to demand the last chapter now or tell you to put it off as long as you can. lol. But I know whatever you do it will be an amazing read. Always a pleasure, thanks heaps for sharing

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addicted_mb December 29 2009, 20:27:52 UTC
Aww thanks, such a great compliment! :D

I have to say I'm a little sad this is ending. I think it does need to end at
some point though and if I didn't end it here I'd
probably just keep it going with fluff stories. I enjoy
fluff stories but I don't think it would do the story justice.
Maybe there could be couple of short connected fluff pieces though! :) we'll see!

Oh and cliffhangers? I couldn't do it with this one, but maybe I should end it
one just to annoy everyone? ;)

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ttandme69 December 30 2009, 02:02:08 UTC
Cliffhanger...come on, do not do that to me!!! unless it will lead to a sequal??? LOL.... Thanks, Lisa

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addicted_mb December 30 2009, 10:50:46 UTC
There is a possibility for some fluffy one offs that are
paired with this.

There's also a possibility I would do some stories
based on other's ideas connected to this one!

:D

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pens_co927 December 29 2009, 22:31:33 UTC
I just did a marathon read of this story and that last line cracked me up. I couldn't stop laughing. Ya know they say blondes have more fun. Maybe it's those who do blondes have more fun? Great story! Can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the BAU

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addicted_mb December 29 2009, 22:45:59 UTC
Thanks! :)

Lol I thought it was such a perfect way to end! It may be that the doing blondes have more fun! Who knows? :D

I have the next chapter all planned out! I rckon it's going to be funny, but you'll just have to wait and see. ;)

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