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Nov 25, 2007 02:46

here, where the daylight begins
(or, the journey of ryan ross and what happened next)
Panic! At The Disco/My Chemical Romance, plus cameos. (Ryan/Gerard, some Ryan/TomRad, others)
22,212 words, r, third person. Thanks to wishpaper for the read-through and to denialgreen for the wonderfully fabulous beta job. A quick word of warning - I took a few liberties with the ( Read more... )

fandom: fall out boy, fandom: my chem, pairing: gerard/ryan, fandom: panic

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runner_bean November 25 2007, 22:05:04 UTC
Just one note on a typo:

the woman says in a bored voice, raising her eyebrows at him, eyes half-lidded in distain.

It's "disdain." Sorry!

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addandsubtract November 25 2007, 22:54:14 UTC
Hee, thank you! I always miss a few.

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runner_bean November 25 2007, 23:14:58 UTC
Yeah, it's pretty much impossible to catch them all yourself. Weird that your spellcheck didn't find that one, though.

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sullen_hearts November 26 2007, 21:43:08 UTC
Oh, I love this, perfect, just a nice bit of angst and a lot of love, and ngggg.

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addandsubtract November 27 2007, 00:48:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it! :)

(Also, Libertines!)

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robjlea November 30 2007, 02:08:31 UTC
Besides my enjoyment of this story for what it is - a really great story - it helped put in reference a friend of mine. They too turn off the world - don't check voice mail, ignore email, no calls out, ignores you knocking on the door and the frustration it causes in everyone around them is very hard. That part of your story was very real for me and I wanted you to know that I appreciate you effort to show how hard it is on the other side. Thank you.

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addandsubtract November 30 2007, 21:29:42 UTC
Wow, thank you. That's incredibly flattering. I'm glad that this helped, and also that it seemed like a realistic representation of what that is like. I've known some very reclusive people, and I know what you mean, to some degree, when you say it's very frustrating. The fact that this helped, even a little, is really amazing!

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iamsupernova January 21 2008, 00:36:00 UTC
(he refuses to check his baggage, would rather have control over it at all times than not have to schlep it around with him)

:D
<3!

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addandsubtract January 21 2008, 12:24:04 UTC
Hee! What can I say, it's a great word! :D

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forochel February 27 2008, 13:24:49 UTC
I am spazzing a lot right now, Maddyface. 8D This is all so quiet and self-contained and entirely Ryan Ross. How do you do this!!

Also, *mismatched.

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figletofvenice February 27 2008, 18:01:01 UTC
I am glad that you agree with my characterization! Ryan Ross is such a subdued joy to write, I'm not even joking.

Ahahahaha. I cannot spell to save my life! It is sad.

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forochel March 12 2008, 03:30:09 UTC
...I am going to reread this, I tell you belatedly. *ttly catching up with comments*

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addandsubtract March 12 2008, 12:24:22 UTC
I am glad! This is, um. One of the fics I am most proud of. (Also, dude, wow, I got like 14 comments from you this morning! :D ilumishy! ♥)

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