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Jan 18, 2007 22:23

Substance Free
Battle/Super Junior (TaeRyu, KihChul, KiChris, LioHwiHae)
3,565 words. R. Third person. (in which there are copious amounts of alcohol, and inhibitions are throw by the wayside never to be heard from again.)

( Ryu licks his lips and runs his hands over his body, shirt slipping up over his stomach, flash of smooth skin. )

pairing: donghae/hwichan/lio, fandom: super junior, pairing: heechul/kihyun, pairing: chris/kibum, pairing: ryu/taehwa, fandom: battle

Comments 18

sleepy_sheep137 January 19 2007, 04:14:22 UTC

ALSDKJFALSJDFLAJSDRFASOJK YOU ARE MADE OF WIN!!!!!!!! PLEASE EXCUSE ME WHILE I DIE FANGIRLISHLY *SPAZZ* *DED*

addandsubtract January 19 2007, 04:26:35 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHA. THANK YOU I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT! NO DYING!

bunengshuode January 19 2007, 04:49:43 UTC

OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND AM GOING TO ABUSE CAPSLOCK AND KEYBOARDMASH AS USUAL BECAUSE YOU ARE SO WIN. I STILL LOVE THE KIHYUN/HEECHUL THE BEST, BECAUSE THOSE TWO ARE SO SKANKY HOS HAVING KINKY REFRIGERATOR SEX PROBABLY AND POOR TAEHWA WALKING IN ON THEM STILL MAKING OUT WHEN EVERYONE ELSE IS ALREADY PASSED OUT AND/OR WAKING UP. KIBUM AND CHRIS ARE LIKE THE MOST ADORKABLE THINGS EVER AND I LOVE HOW KIBUM'S LIKE, "OH, WELL, HEECHUL'S PLOTS DON'T END ALL THAT BADLY, I'LL GIVE HIM THAT." XDDD. SO CUTE. AWWWW. THIS WHOLE THING WAS SO AMAZING AND SO WIN AND JUST ♥ MADDY YOU ARE AWESOME!

addandsubtract January 19 2007, 20:51:11 UTC

YOU KNOW THAT HEECHUL AND KIHYUN HAVE SPECIAL MAKING OUT SKILLS. BECAUSE, LIKE, THEY ARE HEECHUL AND KIHYUN AND THEY DON'T NEED SLEEP THEY PRETTY MUCH ONLY NEED SEX TO FUEL THEMSELVES ON. SEX AND ALCOHOL. ANYWAY I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT, AND KIBUM/CHRIS IS SUCH FUN TO WRITE, HEE. ♥

bunengshuode January 19 2007, 21:24:09 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHA. THAT IS SO TRUE. GOD, THEY WOULD MAKE SUCH AN AWFUL PAIRING IF THEY EVER GOT IT IN THEIR HEADS TO TEAM UP TOGETHER AND TAKE OVER SM OR SOMETHING. OR, LIKE, IF SM DECIDED TO PUT THEM IN A TEMPORARY BAND TOGETHER. IT WOULD BE THE END. ♥ KICHRIS ARE SO CUUUTE. THEY ARE LIKE THE SNUGGLYADORABLEANTI-EVILCUTE! THEY BALANCE OUT THE KIHCHUL. XD!

addandsubtract January 20 2007, 16:27:27 UTC

AHAHAHAHA THEY WOULD SO WIN. THEY'D BE ABLE TO JUST LIKE BOUNCE IDEAS OFF OF EACH OTHER AND CREATE DIABOLICAL PLANS. HEEEE. IT'S FUNNY HOW CUTE THE KICHRIS ENDED UP, BECAUSE MY KIBUM IS ESSENTIALLY AN ASSHOLE. BUT I GUESS CHRIS IS JUST GOOD AT MAKING OTHER PEOPLE CUTE. AWWW.

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addandsubtract January 19 2007, 20:51:47 UTC

Hee. Thank you! I am glad that you like it! Drunk!fic is so much fun. :D

eleclya111 January 19 2007, 17:34:22 UTC

“Nope,” Kihyun says, sipping his drink, lowering it with casual fingers. These boys are mine whenever I want them, he thinks, and he knows it shows on his face, sees the flash of something, understanding, on Heechul’s face before it’s gone.

I really love that part. And the whole fic is amazing, especially the ending.

And woah, Heechul/Battle again!

(Waits for DBSK/Battle)

addandsubtract January 19 2007, 20:52:50 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, for some reason, I think that Heechul and Kihyun would just understand each other.

Heechul/Battle fore the win!

(And dude, that would be such fun. Hmm.)

m1s7resss January 21 2007, 00:52:21 UTC

That was so unbelievably awesome. Heechul and Kihyun together is just made of crack and love and just pure fucking win! xD

I agree with eleclya111, there should be some Battle/DBSK fic. *nods* if someone doesn't write one soon i'll resort to it bcuz i see chris/yoochun speaking engrish.

*goes back to re-read*

addandsubtract January 21 2007, 20:11:05 UTC

Heechul and Kihyun would just, like, plot the destruction of SME and then take over, ahahahaha.

I'm glad that you like it! And yes, Battle/DBSK would be full of win.