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Title: Stalled
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: HanChul, KiHan
Rating: PG-13?
Disclaimer: I don't own.
Summary: It starts when Kibum topples to the floor and doesn’t get up.
Notes: Third person, wtfbbq. 6,161 words, also wtf. Melodramatic angst things.

Comments

[ouimonsieur]

OMG ME WHAT OMG

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OMG HI YOU WHAT?

[ouimonsieur]

OMGZ MAD. OMGZ LYK OMGZ. OMGZ LYK OMGZ. THIS WASN'T EVEN LONG. I KEPT ON STARING AT THE SCROLLY BAR THING AT THE SIDE AND GOING "OMGZ ITS GOING TO END SOON OMGZ NOESS1!!!"

But. This was so perfect. Especially Heechul. Esp since you've "never written him beofre for realz" LOLZ @ U. flouncing!Heechul = best thing in the world. omg I love him.

He’ll be a better person, he’ll be healthier. He’ll keep his promises.

That made me sad. SO MUCH KIBUM!ABUSE OMG. But this is PERFECT because then Heechul can flounce off to fall in love with Shiwon. YEY!11!!

♥ ILY

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I DIDN'T KNOW THERE COULD BE SO MANY OMGZ, WTF. AND IT IS SO LONG JHKEDSGFLKH WHAT.

Shut up. Why with the making fun on my typos? THAT'S NO VERY NICE. I am, however, so glad that Heechul = in character. BECAUSE I HAVEN'T WRITTEN HIM BEFORE. And dur he flounces, he's Heechul!

I love the Kibum!abuse. It's so much fun, and so very, very easy. He's so CUTE. And really good at pretending to be angry, wtf? NO SEQUEL.

♥ ILYTOO

[hoyah]

_ _ moving as always. 8D and long. _ _ oh poor rella/kibum/hankyung.

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Thanks! I know, it's far, far too long. I have no idea what happened, ahahaha. :D

[hoyah]

xD it's not too long. 8D i like that your fics are long.

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I'm glad. 'Cause this is the second long!fic I've written and I've got another one coming.

[coyotecolored]

Oh, this was beautiful... I can't pretend KiHan is a favorite pairing of mine, and I'm sort of dying to know what was going on in Heechul's head through all of this, but it was lovely anyway, and I'm glad Kibum got a happy ending, and I think I'm babbling a little.

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Thank you, I'm glad that you got all the way through it, heh. I do think that this is a bit of a limited fic, because I chose to write from Kibum's perspective only, which meant there was only so much I could show. Thanks for the comment!

[coyotecolored]

I live for long-fics, so there was no problem getting through it! And you did do a very good job of keeping it to Kibum's perspective, so obviously Han's thoughts and Heechul's thoughts remained an unknown perspective, but especially Heechul since he's just that much more difficult to read to begin with, I guess. xD

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I think there should be more long!fics. There's just something ery satisfying about reading them. And you're right, Heechul is really hard to read. I honestly have no idea what is going on in his head ever, I think. Which is why I was a little nervous about writing him, even if I didn't actually have to show his thoughts. If that makes any sense, ahahaha. :D

[quixoxotic]

so much angst ;o;

it was so good, as usual. i'm glad it ended up kihan 8D

i think my favorite parts included mentionings of cell phones. >.> iono why.

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So much angst, omg.

I'm glad you like it! KiHan = awesome.

I actually really enjoyed writing those parts. I don't know why, either.

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techonology prevails!!

it's the age of romance through a wire.

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Technology always wins. This I have learn through many a movie.

What could be better than a confession through text message? That, m'dear, is the definition of the new romantic.

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I'm glad. This fic is very long, wtf. Like, ten pages, which is massive for me. I'M HAPPY SOMEONE APPRECIATES THE LONG!FIC.

Kibum is so EMO in this fic, omg. So much emoez. I'm glad that his thoughts didn't get too... repetetive.

ENDINGS ARE HARD, SO I'M HAPPY.

You know Heechul flounces. And flounces well. Also, he apparently knows all. ♥