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Title: Untitled, with a Purpose
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: KiHyun
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't own.
Summary: You slip at his name, though he seems to remember yours.
Notes: Second person. 1,074 words. Plotless, mostly, but not quite porn.

Comments

[hoyah]

wow. that was some hot lovin'. and i'm in love with present tense. *_* i'm also in love with your sexual dialogue. 8D *falls over*

[addandsubtract]

Heh, thanks. I don't usually write even this close to smut, so yeah. Er. Dialogue during sex is obscenely fun to write, I swear.

[kyuhyun]

PRZ BE ALLOWING ME TO FIND WHERE MY BRAIN WENT.

*ahem*

Your muscles hurt to move, and that’s when you really know he’s a keeper.

Best line EVER XD Plus pushy bottom!Kyuhyun made me cackle 8B

And I love the descriptive wording and the present tense format ♥♥♥

[addandsubtract]

OMG WHERE DID IT GO?

Thank you! I figured if I was going to make Kyuhyun bottom, he was damn well going to be a pushy bottom. It's fun to write, anyway. ♥♥♥

[candymint]

DUDE
HOT
ILYLOTSANDLOTS THIS WAS UBER SEXY =DD
♥♥♥

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THANKS. :D

ILYTOO AND I'M GLAD IT WAS SEXY CAUSE I DON'T USUALLY WRITE SEX.

♥♥♥

[quixoxotic]

who knew kyuhyun could be so ferocious?

that was hot. *_*

ily.

just one thing though:

I think in the paragraph that starts This boy, though, this boy, you mean His heels are digging into the muscles in your back and not He heels are digging into the muscles in your back.

^^

[addandsubtract]

You know he is. Or, well, I want him to be. Pushy!bottoms make me very happy.

Thank you. Ily too!

And thanks for the editing thingy, it's been repaired. XD

[magnolium]

Stars = love
You = more love
Your stories = always fucking delicious

♥

[addandsubtract]

Stars = so much love, omg. Yay for you knowing them!
♥♥
Thaaank you, sex is not something I write, wth.