Ignorance In Pieces (10/?)

[adamissexable]

Title: Ignorance In Pieces (10/?)
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[cc70]

Please don't take this the wrong way but I'm missing Kris in this story. I keep hoping he'll have a bigger part but he never does... :(

[adamissexable]

No worries, you'll see some of him very soon.

[adamissexable]

Violent!Adam is different, I know, I know. But a) different is great(right?) ha and b) I promise it'll be worth it!

[vampyvet]

This Adam freaks me out too!

[kirabella1588]

...I should have listened to the warning but I had already read the rest of the story and even though I have major triggers I couldnt tear my eyes away.

This is a disgustingly beautiful piece of work

[adamissexable]

I'm sorry that this was a hard read for you, it was just as hard for me to write. I think you're comment "This is a disgustingly beautiful piece of work" is the best I've gotten thus far, haha.

[lmarie_wilson]

Allison should've just told Kris that she and Adam were in trouble. I don't know if Kris really understands the situation clearly because he should be out back by now. In fact the whole crew should be back there. I can't believe Adam's beautiful face is cut. *sniff,sniff*

Angry Adam is hot, but he needs to be smarter. He should've snatched Drew up as soon as he spotted them in the back room. Ali and Drew had no business being in the back room. I mean, the back room is for sex, right?

And, why is Adam mad at Kris in the first place? I get that Adam doesn't want to get hurt. However, Adam is not acting cool and indifferent, he's acting super pissed as if he caught Kris fucking some other guy/girl or something. Adam is the one that basically rejected Kris...after watching Kris jackoff, in private. Kris should be the one pissed.

I just found your story and I'm hooked. I love Adam's inner voice, it's funny. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

[adamissexable]

Thanks for your reviews everyone, I know this chapter is edgy, but it all fits into the storyline, so hang in there. (: