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A/R REMIX: "Running Start"

Oct 10, 2012 11:28

Title: Running Start
Rating: T.
Original story: Making Strides
Original author:miabicicletta

( Running Start )

Comments 11

defyingnormalcy October 10 2012, 18:44:24 UTC

This was so much fun to read! I love that a good portion of the BSG cast made it's way into the fic, I love ensemble stories. :D

I also really loved Laura's saucy response to Bill's question, I can see her teasing him like that, and him taking it well. Kara's invitation to race Laura was adorable; I do love fics that have them sharing more of a mother/daughter relationship - I'll never understand why TPTB didn't decide to do that as well. :(

Lovely fic! :D

icedteainthebag October 10 2012, 19:53:44 UTC

Oh, goodness. I hope she saves some energy for the run tomorrow.

OR NOT.

The original was great. This adds something great to it. :)

wishflsinfl October 10 2012, 20:09:45 UTC

This is cute and surprisingly upbeat. Nicely done!

fragrantwoods October 10 2012, 21:13:24 UTC

So sweet and upbeat, and I love the glimpse into pilot banter and interaction. And A/R are adorable here, knowing where they're going with this and enjoying the ride :-D

afrakaday October 10 2012, 23:34:56 UTC

yay! I seriously love that you chose to remix this fic, and I frakking love what you did with it. Jogging leads to sexytimes. Canon fact!

And everything else...the ribbing going on in the duty locker (I got mad love for Skulls, as we share a name...not Hamish), the fact that Bill and Laura are on their second drink....yeah. This is great.