I was thinking of that, but the first part got really serious...*thinks* May mess around with it when I get home tonight. So you think it's okay as is, though?
Thanks for the imput. I had written this relatively huge backstory for why Johnw as there-and it gave some intel on Jamie, but it got way too serious way too fast, which made the whole thing not work. *rolls eyes* Didn't think about using someone else, though. I wanted to make it appropriate for SG1 and SGA, but Lorne would work. hmmm....lemme see how it works.
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So you think it's okay as is, though?
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Didn't think about using someone else, though. I wanted to make it appropriate for SG1 and SGA, but Lorne would work. hmmm....lemme see how it works.
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