FIC: DOGS/REBORN - Affair in Venice
Title: Affair in Venice, Act I Scene I
Fandom: DOGS/DOGS: Bullets and Carnage & Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Rating: R
Pairing: Squalo/Badou
Disclaimer: NO! NO! NO!
Feedback: Please, no. It's not my fault. heyheywhat is a mind-washing soul stealer.
Notes: I KNOW, OKAY. I KNOW.
( what the hell )
Fandom: DOGS/DOGS: Bullets and Carnage & Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Rating: R
Pairing: Squalo/Badou
Disclaimer: NO! NO! NO!
Feedback: Please, no. It's not my fault. heyheywhat is a mind-washing soul stealer.
Notes: I KNOW, OKAY. I KNOW.
( what the hell )
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I thought of both his thoughts and him actually stumbling in the balcony when I read this. And the wine ref. HAHAHAHA.
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The problem is, concludes the redhead irately, that he doesn't know the problem. He doesn't know what malfunctioned in his brain, what neuron misfired, and landed him in Venice, half-naked on Squalo Superbi's balcony.
I already told you if you remember >/ that this line made me laugh. AFFAIR IN VENICE!
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[and something else oh god Badou was burning up maybe he had a fucking fever or something]. He pulls Badou with him, by the arm, not the hand, because they aren't queer [and because Squalo hasn't asked about that scar, yet]
First, the song. It was crazy how it fit.
Second, the HAND. and NOT BEING QUEER THING. Becaue they're really not. Just. fd;hlkf;lgkjds GOD RABID. You don't even know how much I love that bit. So hard.
AND THE LAST LINE.
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I feel that this icon is only appropriate.
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Badou says HONEY IT AIN'T NO THANG.
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HOW 'BOUT THIS, SWEET THANG?
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THAT? I SEEN THAT ON DAYTIME TELEVISION, SHOOT.
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[obnoxious assholes with white hair, why was he always surrounded by obnoxious assholes with white hair?]
This amused me enough the first time I read through it. OH, BADOU. You really do have no luck.
Badou decides to blame the sudden colour he feels in his face on the wine. It doesn't work.
I'm still trying to pinpoint exactly why I like this so much. lksjdglkkjl. Probably because of the last sentence of iiit and the fact that he can't deny it even to himself.
He pulls Badou with him, by the arm, not the hand, because they aren't queer [and because Squalo hasn't asked about that scar, yet].
I like how he makes an outright point of doing that. And then I absolutely adore the brackets in this sentence for so many reasons, ughhh. ♥
Mouth descending, his fingers tangle in Squalo's hair, pulling, wanting, embracing the scorching heat because fuck it he'd always loved going down in smoke and flames.I know I already told you over AIM that the ending line killed me. But, guh, with the ( ... )
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