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[gryffindorkz]

Now, we ALL know what a literary masterpiece the Twilight books are - and that they will one day rival other classics such as Pride & Prejudice or The Bible! But, there is one teeny change I must make to Eclipse.

Now, I'm no genius like Ms. Meyer but why don't y'all have a peek.

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[gryffindorkz]

Would you be shocked if I said I had never written anything before this? I know you would, don't bother answering - because I am modest enough to say it was fantastic.

I too would have been very happy had it ended there. So much so that I have recently re-printed my own version. It also has a snazzy new cover!

Watch out God! Soon I will beat you in world sales with my updated book. It'll even be bigger than your son, Jesus himself.

[welurklate]

WIN. The Office reference at the end gives you extra points.

and yes, I like to think that's what Bella meant by 'CAN'T IMPOSE THIS PAIN ON HIM11!!'

Seriously, that passage of the book never fails to piss me off. No Jacob, she's told you for the 50th time that she doesn't want you, and just because you're going to listen (not before you play another fucking mind game with her) this time, doesn't mean YOU ARE THE BIGGER PERSON. You cannot be a martyr if there is nothing to sacrifice. So yes, Jacob in Bella's words, YOU ARE A FUCKING IDIOT.

[modernthirst]

HAHA DAVID BRENT.

I want this version of the book, but I'd also like a brutal murder scene in addition to this bit of awesomeness.

[boleyn]

ROFL AWESOME!

You should siriusly rewrite like, all the annoying and stupid parts with Jacob and Bella from Eclipse.

[poetrytoprose]

Oh hey! Where I can buy this? Just like I got the stinking Tim/Lyla FNL DVD set, I think I got the Jacob-filled edition of Eclipse. I want this one.