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childhood tales, kangin/leeteuk

Jul 22, 2010 16:48

Childhood tales
Kangin/Leeteuk, PG, ~2400 words
I disclaim.

Written for colorstainedsj. A great humongous gigantic thank you to everyone who voted! :D I love you all. ♥__♥ Also to everyone who tolerated me while I whined and went on and on inconsolably about this, ruo_qi, Steph and especially imaginetears for looking through my final draft. :D

( his mother used to tell him stories when he was young. )

genre: friendship, fandom: super junior, rating: pg, pairing: kangin/leeteuk

Comments 48

gorgeous. amaelamin_ July 22 2010, 09:07:54 UTC

It's a different kind of love, he tells himself when Jungsu glances up at him through dark lashes and even darker eyes, rolling his hips against Youngwoon's, a smirk that really isn't a smirk staining his lips. The fans are screaming their hearts out, punctuating the heavy air with exclamation marks, until Youngwoon doesn't know if he should stop before he gets carried away. He doesn't know how his hand had made its way beneath Jungsu's shirt, near the small of his back, and Jungsu doesn't stay around to let him find out. He bounces away with a light laugh and even lighter eyes, leaving Youngwoon flustered and alone in his puzzling thoughts ( ... )

i love you. featherie July 22 2010, 09:13:20 UTC

Omg dude how are you so fast I haven't even posted this to miracle yet lmao. :DDD Thank you, I spent like an hour on that bit about Youngwoon's reaction to Jungsu's kisses because it's kinda hard to figure them out sometimes. >:

;~; that's so sweet of you Helen. I think I write too much, sometimes.

ditto amaelamin_ July 22 2010, 10:01:13 UTC

no such thing as writing too much especially when you're as good at it as you are. and you got first place with this piece?? very well-earned.

Re: ditto featherie July 22 2010, 10:05:01 UTC

No I srsly have... so many wips you will not believe it. And yeah I did. :D Thanks bb!

thundersquall July 22 2010, 09:21:48 UTC

I didn't get a chance to vote or read most of the colorstained entries because of my computer problems but this is absolutely GORGEOUS, bb! Congrats on first place, you deserve it ♥

This fic is beautiful, all the time and effort you spent on crafting it really shone through. Amazing job. :D

featherie July 22 2010, 09:29:16 UTC

Aw that's okay, computer problems really do suck, don't they. >: I whined so much about this lmao. Thanks Sheena, ilu! ♥♥♥

iheartsungmin July 22 2010, 09:37:26 UTC

Really well written ;A;
I love the way you write (:

featherie July 22 2010, 09:40:06 UTC

♥ aw thank you so much! :D

ccml July 22 2010, 09:58:44 UTC

I love how you love Kangteuk! ^^ This is really beautiful! Love it so so much! <3

featherie July 22 2010, 10:11:40 UTC

Haha I love how I love kangteuk too. :'D And thank you so much bb!

snoorella July 22 2010, 10:50:58 UTC

that, was beautiful. i swear, it had me smiling throughout some parts, frowning at some and tearing at some and it made me realize how many fics have not had the same effect on me as this fic had and... wow, i'm just speechless so let me quote stuff and just write a really long comment to show how much these 2400 words have affected me.

"One day you're going to meet a girl with dazzling eyes and silky hair, pink lips and a voice as sweet as a rose."

I love the repetition of this line in this piece because of how much it emphasizes his need to meet that kind of girl, that his mother wished he would have and also showed how he needs to meet that kind of girl to live up to it. it's small and that's probably not how you wanted it to be, but that's how it was spelt out to me and i just fell in love with that imagery of a girl that every mum wants for his son and the picture of a woman that every man wants for himself.

A relationship brought into existence simply because of their inclination to gravitate toward each other and the ( ... )

speechless. featherie July 22 2010, 11:13:06 UTC

So um, first of all, thank you so much for writing such a long and lovely comment. :DDD I really appreciate everything you've said here, and... ;~; there is so much awesome in your comment k. You just have to spring this out at me just when I least expect it and now I can't stop smiling.

Yeah I kinda figured, since there hasn't been much of kangteuk as friends rather than lovers, that I'd think deeper into their friendship. Of course every man would want a perfect girlfriend, although that's asking a little too much, but basically this is how I imagine Kangin must feel regarding this matter, considering the amount of gorgeously incredible female idols he used to constantly be surrounded with.

Well to be totally honest, I kind of got the interpretation of comfort being binding from um. Church. Lmao. Ironic but there it is. I just sorta expanded on the idea and it went with the flow of this fic? Like how I imagine Kangin must feel about facing the public again, after everything that's happened - it has to be hard to step out from ( ... )