Good essay. However, you need to watch out. When i read Norton, it did not seem as though she thought it was a failure. remember, in the time frame of Norton were were ASSIGNED to read ( I know you read it all, but you have to keep with teh time ) and the time frame of Zinn, we dont' go into JFK's presidencey. There are still 30 more years of cold war left to fight as we leave to go and write this essay. So making evaluation statements based on what we read, i feel, is rather hard to support. I think you should us the last sentance of your essay as a guide for the 1 or 2 paragraphs above. I'd just be careful in stating that the whole cold war was a failure, and focus more on the failures at home...but, we haven't really covered -that- in the reading yet. but i dunno, maybe Taylor will like that, I'm just saying this as words of caution. anyway, Great essay otherwise.
oh shoot! thanks for telling, but i am too lazy to go find another point to make. and hey, i know norton didnt seem to think it was a failure, but i needed something to compare and contrast and as they always say "as long as you can prove it..."
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Good essay. However, you need to watch out. When i read Norton, it did not seem as though she thought it was a failure. remember, in the time frame of Norton were were ASSIGNED to read ( I know you read it all, but you have to keep with teh time ) and the time frame of Zinn, we dont' go into JFK's presidencey. There are still 30 more years of cold war left to fight as we leave to go and write this essay. So making evaluation statements based on what we read, i feel, is rather hard to support. I think you should us the last sentance of your essay as a guide for the 1 or 2 paragraphs above. I'd just be careful in stating that the whole cold war was a failure, and focus more on the failures at home...but, we haven't really covered -that- in the reading yet. but i dunno, maybe Taylor will like that, I'm just saying this as words of caution. anyway, Great essay otherwise.
-Daniel
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*points and laughs*
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nice song lyric title!
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