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acolyte33

Spirals - Part 1

Dec 06, 2009 17:15

Title: Spirals - Part 1
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to and including 'Secret Santa'
Summary: Cal is ready to move things forward, but Gillian isn't so sure.

Massive love to my betas, beatlejessie and alainnrois for fixing my weird errors. Thanks for the help, ladies!! Thanks for helping me through my various blocks beatlejessie!!!

( Christmas Party )

spirals, fanfic

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acolyte33 December 7 2009, 03:09:31 UTC

Thank you!! :D

crumpled_up December 7 2009, 02:51:35 UTC

There's awesome Cal interfering with Emily and Rick. There's awesome Emily setting up Cal and Gillian. There are awesome presents mixed in with beautiful flirting and mistletoe and kisses on the cheek. And the best part of all, addressing Cal's feelings about what happened in Afghanistan. I wondered if that'd ever be brought up again, so many thanks for that.

This is pretty much the perfect balance of everything. Brilliant.

acolyte33 December 7 2009, 03:11:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad there were so many things you liked!

I really wish the show would address Cal's issues more. But it's only the second season, so I really can't complain!

ljmleo918251 December 7 2009, 04:08:59 UTC

Fantastic. Squeee-o-rama. Of course, just another one of your amazing stories. I can't wait for the rest of it. I completely loved the interactions between Cal and Em, Cal and Gillian, and Em and Gillian. I am curious as to what Gill had to do the next morning...hmmm...I also hope that you make Gill come to her senses and get to swapping spit with Cal by the end...Thanks!!

acolyte33 December 7 2009, 05:05:25 UTC

There's going to be a couple parts of angst and dumb, but she'll come around eventually. :)

As for Gill's plans, I think she was just trying to escape before Zoe showed up lol.

Hint: She does not make it out in time. *snickers*

icarus_abides December 7 2009, 04:53:02 UTC

Dude. DUDE. I love this! So adorable and sexy all in the same go.

The lingerie banter actually made me giggle out loud. It was SO them. Spot on.

I'm wicked excited for the next part!

acolyte33 December 7 2009, 05:06:13 UTC

Thank you! It will either go up tomorrow or Tuesday! Depends on how bad work kicks my butt tomorrow :D

icarus_abides December 7 2009, 05:31:54 UTC

Excellent! Something to get get me through my monster final tomorrow :D

moo3350 December 7 2009, 06:32:20 UTC

Loved this can't wait to read more

acolyte33 December 7 2009, 16:50:26 UTC

Thank you :)