fic: Come In From The Cold (Heroes), part 5/5 - Complete!

[acinogan]

Title: Come In From The Cold, Part 5/5 - Complete!
Author: acinogan
Characters: Elle, Sylar, baby Noah, Noah Bennet, Sandra Bennet, Mohinder Suresh
Word Count: 3671 this bit
Rating: R this part
Summary: AU from "The Eclipse, Part 2" - Elle is raising baby Noah on her own and Sylar drops by for a visit.
Spoilers/Warnings: general thru volume 3 "The Eclipse

Comments

[superkappa]

You finished!!!

Even though I knew how it was going to end, it was still heartbreaking to read. I love how Sylar is so determined to stay near her though, so she can still be in their life, even if just in tree form.

I loved this story from start to finish, and I can't wait to see what you write next!

[acinogan]

i finally finished!

secretly, in my head, this is how they end up in the bennet house in IABD and why claire freaks out in the future.

thanks so much! for the chat help and for lovely comments all the way thru.

[ateenwriter]

Wow that is what I call a plot twist! I got to ask what kind of tree would Elle be? lol
Sylar was sweet though sticking by her although i do with that baby Noah had better control over his power for heavens sake! Baby miracle grows is a buzz kill lol

[acinogan]

ummm...what kind of tree...um. weeping willow? maybe?

sylar held on to the rest of the Haitian spray. no worries. :)

[lemomina]

Oh , Twisted Fic is Twisted ( thats a good thing )
Poor Elle :( she is stuck forever
Sylar becoming the loving father ( is that how we got to the IABD Future ?!)

I hate ontd-st for spamming my f-page ! i missed this and many other fics !!!

[acinogan]

yeah, it's a bit dark, i'd say :) thanks!

well, in my head, this is how we get to the IABD future, but i think i am a bit obsessed with that particulart future.

you found it, no worries :)

[acinogan]

hee hee wrong icon :D

[lemomina]

I LOVE THAT FUTURE !! without dead Noah ofc ! i wished we could have seen more of it , Domesticated Sylar was My fave , he was lovey dovey like Gabriel but with Sylar smartness

cools ^_^

[havemy_heart]

Wow. I can't say I was expecting that at all. Great twist. Poor Elle, though :( She just can't win. And to have her own son do that to her, even if Noah thought he was protecting her. I guess it's cool that Sylar stayed there and let Elle see Noah get older. My question is, did Sylar ever explain to Noah where Mommy is when he got older?

Now I need to go find something fluffy to read ;)

[acinogan]

thanks! yes, poor elle can never win, it seems. the "blonde-and-on-heroes" curse, i think. um...i think if i were sylar, i'd leave that little detail out. "well, son, mommy's been in the front yard this whole time! funny story, that..."

you know what, i always think of you when i post angsty things. :)

[stefichan]

I just read all five parts.

What a terrific and sad fic.

I felt so bad for Elle. And Sylar. And little Noah.

:(

But so good!!

[acinogan]

thanks! for reading and commenting. sorry if i angsted you out :)