all i don't want to need at all (Sam/Dean, pg-13)

Jun 23, 2007 15:01

title: all i don't want to need at all
author: acidquill
disclaimer: don't own em
rating: pg-13
pairing: Sam/Dean
word count: 825
notes: so this week my little muse said to me 'Hey, dontcha wanna write some sappy amusement park fic?' and I was all, 'Um, okay then.' this is what happened - intended to be post AHBL and much angstier, but along the ( Read more... )

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guns_and_butter June 23 2007, 20:38:22 UTC
This is so wonderfully feel-good. Just reading it made me grin and bounce a little. I love Sam "persuading" Dean onto the carousel.

And 'something he'll never forget' sounds mighty damn good, especially now.

I am torn between weeping and a gooey smile. :):

Sam's already opening a candy apple; he bites into it and the slick coating crackles and splinters. Dean watches the little bits of red sugar flake off and stick to his brother's mouth.

YUM YUM YUM. What a great description.

I think I have a cavity now. ♥

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acidquill June 23 2007, 22:17:50 UTC
I swear, my angst just like, BROKE in the middle of this. Though I'm not sorry it did. Nothing, apparently, can stand in the way of the fluff. Heh.

Candy apples are crack. Really. & worked so much better with what I wanted to say than what I started out with (cotton candy).

& how much do I love that you're the first one to read this? ♥

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guns_and_butter June 23 2007, 22:27:58 UTC
Oh man, you made a wise decision. Cotton candy is 0% sexy (also 0% delicious, but that's just my very humble opinion).

I may or may not have been sitting at my desk writing and reading and watching AHBL all day. <.< Strictly for research purposes, you understand.

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acidquill June 23 2007, 22:33:23 UTC
Cotton candy was just too...girly? Lol, okay maybe not the right word. But I could totally see the candy apple scene playing out in my head, with sound effects and everything.

Strictly for research purposes, you understand.
*nods* Of course.

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fleshflutter June 24 2007, 09:42:37 UTC
Oh beautiful style, beautiful idea, all just entirely... beautiful.

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acidquill June 26 2007, 19:13:24 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

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iyalode June 24 2007, 09:52:37 UTC
Love the ending, Dean looking over Sam's shoulder into the mirror ::wibble::

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acidquill June 26 2007, 19:31:13 UTC
:D Thank you so much for readin' darlin!

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acidquill June 26 2007, 19:36:29 UTC
Mmmm this is delicious.
Eeee.

Thank you so much for reading my little fic!

XD

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tigriswolf June 27 2007, 15:28:41 UTC
Aww. Adorable.

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acidquill June 27 2007, 18:40:35 UTC
Thank you :)

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