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[Fic] Ladybug, Ladybug, Fly Away Home

Sep 20, 2011 21:09

Title: Ladybug Ladybug, Fly Away Home
Fandom: X-Men: First Class
Rating: R
Length: 1159 words
Warnings: Violence, mind-fuckery, torture, Dark!Charles
Summary: Post-divorce, someone captures Erik. Charles gets him back and makes them pay.
Notes: This is my first time writing Dark!Charles. I was in a black mood and this is what came out.

( The man in the hallway was burning alive. )

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Comments 1

le_red_queen October 5 2011, 09:10:55 UTC

Oh this. THIS. So very amazing. The only thing I can't get on board with was Charles smiling. I mean grimly maybe, but even then. Charles wouldn't smile through violence in mmy head, having seen too much of it from Cain and Kurt Marko. Somehow I feel that dark!Charles would do violence where violence was due, but without pleasure, butmore like a necessity. Just like Erik does not glory in the violence, he does it because he thinks it is necessary. My two bits anbyway.
But Dark!Charles is a GIANT kink of mine, and you do massive justice to him, especially with locked-in syndrome at the end. *shivers* very very well done!