I really like the Ros and Guil interaction here - you've got Stoppard like whoa here. :) Ophelia came across a little jarring as a character, but then again so does anyone when you're working with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, I think.
I like what you're doing with the stage/camera directions, as well - very visual stuff. You've got a much better handle on this screenwriting stuff than I do, hurhur!
Thanks! I've got CeltX, which is this free screenwriting program, so it lets you format things like an actual screenplay. It's veeeery useful :)
I'm trying to make Ophelia less annoying... I'm not very happy with how she's coming out. But I've never really liked her (she's kind of whiny) so that's probably what I'm projecting. I wish she was less irritating, she'd be easier to write XD
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I like what you're doing with the stage/camera directions, as well - very visual stuff. You've got a much better handle on this screenwriting stuff than I do, hurhur!
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I'm trying to make Ophelia less annoying... I'm not very happy with how she's coming out. But I've never really liked her (she's kind of whiny) so that's probably what I'm projecting. I wish she was less irritating, she'd be easier to write XD
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