Basterds Fic: Spiderwebs (Shosanna/Hellstrom/Landa/Charlotte), NC-17

Jan 17, 2010 16:27



Title: SpiderwebsPairings: Hellstrom/Shosanna, Landa/Charlotte, Hellstrom/Landa, past Shosanna/Charlotte, implied possibility of Landa/Shosanna. Also contains mentions of Shosanna/Marcel, as well as Zoller, Goebbles and Francesca.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2853
Warnings: Dubcon, bloodyplay, sexual violence, other sorts of violence, swearing, AU, a ( Read more... )

major creeper, wait for the cream, wtf brain?, shosanna dreyfus, inglourious basterds, fic

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jean_geanie January 17 2010, 06:47:48 UTC
this is brilliant, you have a wonderful way of writing from Shoshanna's perspective. This is bleak and haunting but incredibly captivating. Well done :)

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acidpenguin46 January 17 2010, 07:13:28 UTC
Thank you, hon! *smishes* That means so much, because Shosanna is probably my favourite character in Basterds.

Thanks again! :)

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falseeeyelashes January 17 2010, 19:16:17 UTC
Oh good god. I really don't even know where to begin. Let's start with: I absolutely love this. The tone and the rhythm of this walks this very thin line between eeriness and being totally seductive. I love it. I also love that Charlotte is in this! And more than that, Col. Landa, up to his old tricks, *laughs*.

I never considered the idea that maybe Marcel would not want to go along with Shosanna's plan, and I think what you spun out of that rejection was absolutely brilliant. And your Hellstrom! Goddamn, yo. So on point, so creepy, and still so damn alluring.

Dieter Hellstrom must be what happens when a shark and snake breed.

This is perfection. And the closing lines? Killer. Thank you so much for writing this! I throughly enjoyed reading this and am going back for a re-read as I write this, heh.

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mezzafredda January 17 2010, 23:54:11 UTC
I second this. It's amazing. Just glorious.

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 01:45:40 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 01:44:54 UTC
Thank you! <3 I'm really happy that you thought it managed to walk that fine line, because there were a few things in there that I thought may tip it on to one side of that line, which I didn't want to do. And hey, if you feature Landa in a fic, you have to expect some sort of a shenanigan.

Thank you so much for reading it. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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linndechir January 18 2010, 00:23:16 UTC
Tell me if I want to read this? Or rather: which parts might I want to read to get Landa/Hellstrom without being raped by icky het? ;D

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 01:47:52 UTC
Um, I wouldn't recommend it. ;p While it does feature creepy Hellstrom quite prominently, it mainly consists of icky het, with a hint of Landa/Hellstrom to imply that this whole scenario was hatched by the two of them.

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linndechir January 19 2010, 06:58:09 UTC
Aw, pity. *hugs anyway* Any chance of the boot story coming up soon?

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 07:19:13 UTC
*hugs back*

The boot story should be making an appearance soon-ish. I'd love to say that it would be my next fic, but unfortunately Paul and Gunther seem to have other ideas. (They seem to have had some sort of strange effect on my mp3 player - songs keep popping up at random that are so perfect for those two, and I can no longer avoid writing fic. ;p)

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suger_baby_love January 19 2010, 06:52:11 UTC
Wonderful story dear! I'm usually not much into het stuff either, but this actually didn't bother me. It was very well written, it kept my attention, I liked the choice of words....everything. Awesome! Oh and also, I love the line about the snake and the shark too. <3<3<3

I am actually working on a Landa/Hellstrom fic right now...I'm not having much luck though. It was going okay at first but I've run into some problem. Stupid writer's block. It's been so long since I've written anything before this and I am having a hard time getting back into the swing of things I guess. >.< Anyway....I am going to try to work on it tonight and see where I get. I'll let you know when I've progressed on it. d^_^b

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 07:08:00 UTC
Thank you, it's wonderful to read that someone who isn't a huge fan of het can still enjoy it (I'm not much of a reader/writer of het either, but only because there are so few het pairings that inspire my creativity to that extent.) I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Ooh, I can't wait until further progresiion is made on your Landa/Hellstrom fic. I know exactly what you mean about writer's block - until the bunny for this attacked, I was getting absolutely nowhere on about 4 or 5 stories that I was trying to work on. I hope it progresses further, and if you'd like any help or anything, I'll be willing to lend a hand. :D

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suger_baby_love January 19 2010, 07:43:11 UTC
I have yet to find a het pairing that I am crazy about. lol But I have to commend you on keeping my attention. I lose interest in things very quickly...but your story was great! <3

Yeah, actually, I may ask for your help soon if I continue to not get anywhere on it. Hell, I may ask for your help if I DO get somewhere on it. =) I'll let you know soon. <3

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 07:48:02 UTC
*blushes* Thank you so much, that really means so much.

And cool, just ask away when you need to. :)

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suger_baby_love January 19 2010, 06:57:21 UTC
Also, my friends and I get bored and do random things sometimes....so I was going to share with you what we did today, because I know you and people that look at your journal will appreciate this. So here you go....the Sweded version of the Inglourious Basterds menu staring me and my friends. =)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pgXB1XSc8M

Hope it entertains you as much as it does us! <3
(PS -- You can delete this comment if you don't like people posting links in comments....I wasn't sure. @_@)

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 07:13:28 UTC
Hee, I actually have the post with that video open in another tab. I'll do a more in-depth comment over there, but I'll just say that I absolutely adored it. It was very entertaining, just the sort of laugh that I needed after the Basterds shut-out at the Golden Globes (bloody Basterds, making me care about such things *facepalm*)

And I'm fine with people posting links in comments. It's a great way of seeing things that you may have missed out on otherwise. *hugs*

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suger_baby_love January 19 2010, 07:33:07 UTC
The post with that video in it? On....Youtube or......? I'm not sure where you are talking about leaving a comment to it. lol

I know, right? I was very disappointed about the GGs. >.<

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acidpenguin46 January 19 2010, 07:42:52 UTC
Oh, it was posted over at operation_kino in this post.

I'm trying to avoid all thoughts about that movie about sparkly blue people, because those sorts of thoughts lead to irrational anger. ;p

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