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"Your Freckles are Plentiful." Rated PG.

Mar 01, 2011 00:38

Title: Your Freckles are Plentiful
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Length: ~1300
Disclaimer: Not mine

-Written for d_hearts_c, for prompt #56. I had a lot of trouble with this one, unfortunately, and I didn't manage to get the montage in. It happened off-screen, at least ( Read more... )

character: sam winchester, character: castiel, rating: pg, genre: pre-romance, character: dean winchester, genre: fluff, misc.: prompt fic, fandom: supernatural, genre: friendshippy, length: 1000-2500 words

Comments 32

fannishliss March 2 2011, 11:51:44 UTC

the haiku are so perfectly cas. i really love this! i like how dean keeps the poem. :)

'You're meticulous and you take care of your car. I can admire this.' == LOL!

an_ardent_rain March 2 2011, 16:44:00 UTC

Hee! Yeah, I thought it would be completely adorable if Dean kept it, all shifty-eyed, and maybe Sam finds it in the laundry because Dean left it in his pocket... XD

Thanks for the comment!

dauntperplexity March 2 2011, 16:27:01 UTC

Haha... Castiel and poetry is priceless!

This was adorable...

an_ardent_rain March 2 2011, 16:41:58 UTC

Thank you! :D Glad you liked it.

dontbitethesun March 2 2011, 21:14:01 UTC

lol, pretty cute! Those haikus are all so Cas. I especially like the one about the pie. :)

an_ardent_rain March 2 2011, 21:16:34 UTC

Thanks!

latvela March 3 2011, 05:19:50 UTC

Aww, Cas' haiku lines are so funny and "Please let me hug you" is the sweetest thing ever! Adorable ♥

an_ardent_rain March 3 2011, 05:45:35 UTC

Thank you! :D

vivhasarifle March 3 2011, 16:42:18 UTC

'You make me happy, and I am glad that we're friends. I'll get you some pie.'

I think this one was my favorite because I cracked up uncontrollably.

"Yes," Castiel said. "I know exactly how many you have, and exactly where they are. I put them there."

"Cas. Why the hell do you say stuff like that?"

Oh Dea, you know you like it. :P

"Poetry is for girls," Dean said. "For Hallmark cards. And Sam."

XD. This fic was just awesome, and so them.