Chapter One. "When We Were Young."

[an_ardent_rain]

Title: When We Were Young
Chapter: 1/?
Fandom: Harry Potter
Character(s)/Pairing: Marauders, eventual Remus/Sirius
Word Count: 1400
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[werewolfsfan]

Nice glimpse of my favorite boys.

[an_ardent_rain]

Thank you for the comment! :D Glad you enjoyed.

[phiso_kun]

Ahhh I'm impatient to read more!

I like your writing style - it's very elegant - and makes Sirius's brain sound even more aristocratic. I'm eager to see how this develops. :)

[an_ardent_rain]

Thanks for the comment!

I'm definitely working on the second chapter; I only have 200 words or so, but it is something.

And thank you for the compliment! I definitely tend to write Sirius like that, though I'm not exactly sure why.

[an_ardent_rain]

Thank you for the comment! Hopefully I will have the second chapter up soon. :)

[maresanctum]

Nice! You've made me identify a bit with Peter, (something I rarely do, despite feeling sympathy for the poor thing when he's at this age). Yet you've still shown glimmers of all the things to come, and the dynamics between the boys work well without feeling hectic or busy.

[an_ardent_rain]

Thank you for the comment!

Yes, I definitely wanted to show Peter as more of a person, but at the same time I wanted to set up some of his attitudes that might have played into what happened later.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[brighty18]

Oh, I like this very much so far!

Sirius does not question that it is possible to fall in love at fifteen, but he certainly questions the practicality of it.
I think I can see some wonderful things coming from that!

[an_ardent_rain]

Thank you so much for the comment!

Oh, yes; I definitely hope to expand on that later. XD