"Observation." One Shot. Rated R.

[an_ardent_rain]

Title: Observation
Character(s)/Pairing: Rayne... technically
Written for: Well, was supposed to be for bugchicklv's Porn-a-Thon, but obviously I was way too late. Used the prompt: Voyeur
Rating: R
Word Count: 3671
Disclaimer: Not mine.
-Author's Notes: Well! My first time at Rayne-smut - how'd I do? I'd started it awhile ago but then never finished, but

Comments

[an_ardent_rain]

*hands you new brain* Thanks very much for the comment. "Wow" seems good, so I'm happy that you liked it. Heh. I don't have very many brain-destroying story things, but I do try. ^_^

Thanks again!

[lidi_photos]

I know I'm very, very stupid right now (you know, too excited and all), but this is the best sex fic ever! Even if it never even happened.
I was totally blown away by it. And I'm not ashamed to admit it (though usually I am).

[an_ardent_rain]

I'm so glad you liked it! Wow, and I'm just incredibly flattered! This one was a little more difficult to get just right - I had to make sure to keep it fairly realistic (and usually I go more for stylized), and then try to match up the scenes so it wasn't always clear if he was with River or the other woman.

Whoo! I'm rambling. But I'm so very, very glad you enjoyed it! And it's nice to know my hard work paid off! Thanks for the comment. :)

[lidi_photos]

It was really interesting to see this story from Jayne's pov while getting glimpses of what if might be for River.
Once again - it was very, very, very hot.

(I thought that it was me who was rambling and spamming you with comments. It's 5 am here and I'm sleepless because I've been reading your stories and I'm quite happy about it :)).

[an_ardent_rain]

Thanks! I did try for hot, so... *preens* Glad that worked out, then! :D

And I never mind comment-spamming. Heh - I'm quite a fan, in fact! XP

[theneis]

Wow. Great story!