Comments | acidandink: "The Reluctant Suitor." One Shot. Rated PG.

an_ardent_rain in acidandink

"The Reluctant Suitor." One Shot. Rated PG.

Aug 15, 2008 11:49

Title: The Reluctant Suitor
Character(s)/Pairing: pre-Rayne
Prompt: #32 - Line
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2542
Disclaimer: Not mine.

( The Reluctant Suitor )

rating: pg, misc.: suitor-verse, one shot: the reluctant suitor, genre: pre-romance, character: simon tam, misc.: river speak, misc.: photoshop fail, length: 2500-4000 words, misc.: prompt fic, fandom: firefly, character: kaylee frye, character: river tam, character: jayne cobb

Comments 6

voodoo_buddha September 13 2008, 20:05:15 UTC

That was good. You got River's voice down pretty well.

an_ardent_rain September 13 2008, 20:15:08 UTC

Thank you very much for the comment! Glad you liked - I actually worked pretty hard at this, so I'm glad it was okay. Hee. Thanks again! :)

lizette77 September 23 2008, 04:55:35 UTC

River has more restraint than I would. Jayne better not go sexin anyone else! I love your River...very crazy :)

an_ardent_rain September 23 2008, 13:55:15 UTC

Heh - I know what you mean! But once he's hers... He better watch out. :P

Thanks very much for the comment!

lidi_photos November 16 2008, 00:26:26 UTC

You captured River's thoughts brilliantly.
And Jayne is adorable here.
*squee*

an_ardent_rain November 16 2008, 05:13:43 UTC

Thanks so much! I think this is one of my very favorite pieces. It was sooo much fun to write. :)