...Love... - Part 10

[achooseylover]

-About Three Months Later-

-Mirotic Concert in Seoul-

-6:12 PM-

My eyes were glued to the moving picture in front of me while I crossed my legs, rested my elbow on my thigh and cradled my chin in my palm. I heard everyone congratulate Junsu, who was sweaty, smiling and giving high fives to his backup dancers before running off

Comments

[rethzneworld]

NICE WORK!! please keep writing, yours so far quite steep to the reality :)

[achooseylover]

Thank you very much!! =D I am definitely trying very hard to stick to the timeline of their actual events and to build their characters up as realistically as possible! I'm so glad you enjoy it! Hope you like the rest of it!! ^___^ <3

[achooseylover]

New Reader! Welcome! ^__^
Thank you very very much for the comments! Especially the comment about the flow because I really feel I suck so bad at pacing, so it's great to hear that I'm actually doing well in that field!
As for the lawsuit topic, it does seem a bit of a jump, but as you said, I am basing it on real events just to make it even more realistic. I wasn't even quite sure how to bring it up in the first place! LOL! But i figured for Jaejoong, now was a better time than later ^_^ I hope you'll enjoy the next part! ^__^

[crimson_miharu]

Wrong Tree sister indeed! You gotta love Min he always knows what to say to lighten the mood and I'm glad that both he and Su are learning to accept both of their Hyungs.

I love the part where they were singing 'Hey Girl" tp Jae that scene was too funny!

[achooseylover]

LOL yes, Changmin! No matter what, he can always come up with a nice, snarky line to brighten the mood. XD And I am also glad that Changmin and Junsu are doing their best to understand. ^__^ <3

Ahhha! I loved writing the 'Hey!Girl" part!!! When the scene popped in my head at work, I had to keep myself from giggling out loud. I just imagined Jaejoong's expression like (-____-) <"OMG, you guys are such idiots. Get away from me." ahahah!!! And Changmin stealing the strip of short rib was just SO Changmin!

Please look forward to the next part! =D

...Love...

[mcmaster93]

hey,,

I really love this fanfic.. I added you as a friend,, will you add me too?? (you don't need to ofcourse)
i just wanted to say that your fics are awesome and i like to read more of them.. especialy ...Love... part 11 ...

^x^ keep up the good work!!
Whaiting