Dancers In The Mist

Jun 03, 2010 22:45

Disclaimer: The following story is a work of fan fiction. The author does not own Naruto or its characters and is not making any money off of this work. Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto-sama.

After a rough day, Iruka unexpectedly beholds his greatest fantasy.

Dancers in the Mist

He was tired... running back and forth teaching small wandering minds ( Read more... )

kakairu, iruka, mist

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achillona June 4 2010, 16:31:34 UTC
The inspiration for this came from a desire to see more ficcage with kashi and the ninken, but it blossomed into something else...

and a drawing i saw a long time ago called "Flying Iruka" ... unfortunately i don't remember who the artist is...

this could grow into a story...

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sejitsu June 4 2010, 14:34:29 UTC
The imagery in this is just lovely! I second the request for more~ ^^

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achillona June 4 2010, 16:34:52 UTC
Thank you!~_^!
I promise to do my best!

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sony_kit82 June 5 2010, 08:49:13 UTC
that was very lovely, the ending was especially wonderful. :)

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achillona June 7 2010, 13:52:00 UTC
when you're really attracted to someone, that first tire really does feel like a dance...
the best part is... it's left to the readers imagination as to how the dance progresses...

i love the idea of them... seeing each other like that for the first time.. especially after a crappy week.. poor iruka... but at least he received a great reward for his efforts...
a mask-less kakashi!

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dineshakb June 5 2010, 17:11:52 UTC
wow....this was an amazing story...and i third the request for more...

you did such a wonderful job on this hun ^__^

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achillona June 7 2010, 14:00:38 UTC
well ... i guess a sequel would have to start from Kashi's pov.. that way the ninken stay involved...and a great description of how iruka looks rising out of the water... that's where the work will come in, but i got something in mind...

you'll like it!

i just have to get my son graduated from high school this week! then i can relax and write again!

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dineshakb June 9 2010, 05:01:14 UTC
actually a kakashi pov is brilliant...i look forward to reading it

and congrats to your son ^__^

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