Hunters: Beginnings (New Version Edit) Non Complete

May 09, 2008 00:11

Okay this is the NEWEST edit of the first Hunter tail. This is more of how my stories will be from now on. A bit more dialog, and more characterization. I'm also trying to introduce people off and on, instead of 'Villain of the Week' style. And this is not fully complete. It ends before the first fight takes place, which I'm currently trying to ( Read more... )

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anduril_phoenix May 9 2008, 04:34:19 UTC
Quite good so far. :)

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