Comments | abyssinia4077: 3 ficlets - Sam/Daniel; Sam & Teyla; Sha'uri & Jack (and Daniel)

abyssinia4077

3 ficlets - Sam/Daniel; Sam & Teyla; Sha'uri & Jack (and Daniel)

Dec 23, 2007 16:22

First, written for holdouttrout's Stargate Holiday Fic Festival:
Sam/Daniel (sort of) - Mistletoe (PG) [699 words]
( Next year Jack can get his own tree )

fic (fandom): stargate sg1, fic (type): commentfic, fic (fandom): stargate atlantis, fic (type): challenges, fic (type): ship, fic (type): gen, fic (type): ficlets, fic: all

Comments 42

stargazercmc December 24 2007, 00:56:39 UTC

So much pretty on one page. Wow.

I love the Sam/Teyla fic, but the Sha're/Jack/Daniel fic??? Oh, my. Gorgeous.

abyssinia4077 December 24 2007, 01:21:14 UTC

Hee :) YAY for pretty!

So glad it worked - I wanted to give Abydos some oomph without it being too weird or foreign or cliched or whatever, you know?

Thanks so much!

holdouttrout December 24 2007, 00:57:33 UTC

Oh, wow. Well, you may have had trouble with it, but it turned out so beautiful! You write excellent Sha'uri.

abyssinia4077 December 24 2007, 01:22:02 UTC

It took work - mostly having to twist out the culture and the words and the ideas bit by bit by bit. So glad it call came out to something work the effort!

thanks!

(she's fun! I hadn't really written her before this meme)

vipersweb December 24 2007, 06:40:42 UTC

oh! That last one is heartbreakingly beautiful. I love how Sha're and her people protect Jack from himself and how he returns the gesture at the end. Beautiful.

THe other are also cute.

abyssinia4077 December 24 2007, 13:36:17 UTC

Oh, thanks. Jack was in such an incredibly dark place when he went to Abydos, you know? I figure they could see it, if not understand it.
So glad it worked and you enjoyed it. Thanks again!

pulsar4529 December 24 2007, 10:03:28 UTC

I think I like it when you're busy and shouldn't be writing because you seem to write better! I absolutely loved the Sha're one.

abyssinia4077 December 24 2007, 13:37:03 UTC

*sticks tongue out*

Thanks, I think :)

Still...I need to stop writing and get down to work. Bleh.

So glad you liked it. thanks!

sholio December 24 2007, 10:35:00 UTC

I hardly ever read SG-1 fic, but I really adored the Sha'uri one -- so gorgeous and evocative. It really recalled for me the aspects of the show that once upon a time made me fall in love with it. Thinking of O'Neill as he was in the movie era, an angry and broken man unwillingly accepting this gift from a woman he barely knows -- and then the contrast with him, years later, having learned and seen so much, standing up for Daniel as his brother ... oh, lovely.

abyssinia4077 December 24 2007, 13:38:52 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you gave this a chance then and that you liked it. All the characters have really had huge journeys over the years, but Jack's biggest changes probably came more early on and, yeah, glad the contrast came out well. Yay! And Thanks!

(And....eeeeee! You posted commentary for "Running on Empty" *is so runnign over to your LJ after work today*)